寫(xiě)作的重要性 6分最低限，只要結(jié)構(gòu)不出錯(cuò)，得分應(yīng)該為9分。
評(píng)判作文
四級(jí)考試作文主要看內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)、語(yǔ)言三個(gè)方面。
內(nèi)容不跑題即可，注意：1.不要妄圖以情動(dòng)人；2.不要妄圖在構(gòu)思上出奇制勝。
結(jié)構(gòu)上牢記總分總：先寫(xiě)主題句(Topic Sentence)，再寫(xiě)分論點(diǎn)，最后寫(xiě)總結(jié)句(Conclusion)。
語(yǔ)言最重要，往往使評(píng)分產(chǎn)生重大差異，語(yǔ)言要模仿和包裝。
基本表達(dá)
人們認(rèn)為：it is generally/ widely believed/ held/ agreed that
越來(lái)越：be increasingly + adj., be on the rise, the growing number of
萬(wàn)能理由（Omnipotence）
1. 方便：convenient/ convenience
2. 效率：efficient/ efficiently/ efficiency
3. 節(jié)省和浪費(fèi)：save time/ money/ space; economical, thrift
waste time/ money/ space; costly, lavish
4. 人的心理健康：independent, cooperative, competitive,
considerate, confident, creative, sociable,
perseverance; selfish, isolated, conserative
5. 人的身體健康：health, disease, strong, strength, energetic
6. 娛樂(lè)：colorful, pleasure,joy, recreation, entertainmentm, relax
tired, boring, lonely
7. 環(huán)境：environment, pollute, poisonous, dirty
8. 安全和危險(xiǎn)：safe, danger, risk
9. 經(jīng)驗(yàn)：experience, social experience, enter the society
10. 人際：humane, fair, unfair, help, assist, freedom, freely
寫(xiě)完之后修改注意：（內(nèi)容方面盡量不要修改）
1、字母大小寫(xiě)
2、怪符號(hào)
3、單詞拼寫(xiě)
4、主謂一致
5、動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)
6、名詞單復(fù)數(shù)
實(shí)例一
題目：Bicycles――An Important Means of Transport in China提綱：（1）為什么自行車(chē)在中國(guó)這樣普及（2）和汽車(chē)的比較（3）自行車(chē)在中國(guó)的前途
Score: 8
Bicycle is an important means of transport in China. The important reason of it is the economy of Chinese. The use of bicycle in China is widely because people in China have not high wage. They can only afford a bicycle, and they have no money to buy a car which is too expensive. So Chinese usually buy a bicycle, and use it to go to work, or go to travel and so on. The other reason is the large population of China. All these made the bicycle become the important means of transport.
The bicycle, compared to the car, is not too expensive and it is easy to learn and to use and it can save the surface of putting it. It doesn’t ask to build the garage like car. This point is very important to China, because of the lack of land. It isn’t too expensive, so Chinese can afford it. It doesn’t need any oil, and it can’t cause the polusion. All of these are the good needs compared to the car.
In the future, bicycle will be widely used. And it will be in good demand. People will produce much more modern bicycles.
Score: 14
Bicycles are very popular in China. Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles. During the rush hour, you can see that thousands of people -- man and woman, old and young -- ride their bicycles to work and study. That is why China is called “the kingdom of bicycles”.
注：1. 第一句總寫(xiě)，第二句和第三句分寫(xiě)，最后總寫(xiě)。
2. During the rush hour 分詞結(jié)構(gòu)開(kāi)頭。
