作文:
1.娛樂(lè)活動(dòng)多種多樣;
2.娛樂(lè)活動(dòng)可以使人們受益, 也可能帶來(lái)危害;
3.作為大學(xué)生, 我認(rèn)為…
參考范文:
Recreational Activities
In the era of information and technology, there are all kinds of recreational activities. Some people think those recreational activities are great and necessary, because they can help people relax from the hard work and study. Some of the activities, such as hiking, jogging, can help people relax physically; while some of them, such as surfing the Internet, can help people relax mentally.
However, some people think that so many kinds of recreational activities may have a bad effect on our lives. Some people may not resist some temptations from those activities, and indulge themselves in those activities. At last they are lured away from their study or their work.
In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the advantages of various recreational activities and make the most of them. Meanwhile, we should learn how to use those activities positively, and make them a helpful tool for our development.
點(diǎn)評(píng):
本次四級(jí)考試作文題目基本上屬于常規(guī)性題目,但是又體現(xiàn)了與時(shí)俱進(jìn)的特點(diǎn),穩(wěn)中求變,側(cè)重于對(duì)考生基本功的考查以及對(duì)校園內(nèi)學(xué)生除學(xué)習(xí)外的娛樂(lè)方式的關(guān)注。下面就題材和體裁兩方面進(jìn)行點(diǎn)評(píng)。
具體來(lái)說(shuō),首先在題材上,沒(méi)有跑出四級(jí)考試常考的校園類話題,也在我們點(diǎn)點(diǎn)英語(yǔ)教學(xué)團(tuán)隊(duì)的授課范圍之中,但是又體現(xiàn)了細(xì)微變化,由原來(lái)側(cè)重于校園中的學(xué)習(xí)學(xué)類話題轉(zhuǎn)向校園中的學(xué)生的課余娛樂(lè)方面的話題,難度在降低,這個(gè)話題對(duì)于廣大考生來(lái)說(shuō)并不陌生,當(dāng)代大學(xué)生的娛樂(lè)方式越來(lái)越豐富,如上網(wǎng)聊天、體育鍛煉、參加俱樂(lè)部、探險(xiǎn)等項(xiàng)目,但是這些項(xiàng)目的英文表達(dá)可能會(huì)成為考生寫作的攔路虎,希望考生注意積累各種各樣的英文表達(dá),豐富自己的資源庫(kù),這就是“養(yǎng)兵千日,用兵一時(shí)”的道理。這種選材體現(xiàn)了當(dāng)今的社會(huì)教育取向的變化,由關(guān)注學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)?nèi)∠蛳蛉姘l(fā)展和素質(zhì)教育取向的轉(zhuǎn)變,這對(duì)四六級(jí)的考試作文題目的命題有一定的指導(dǎo)作用,這對(duì)于考生的備考有方向性指導(dǎo)。
其次,在體裁方面,由原來(lái)??嫉膽?yīng)用性文體轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)檎磳?duì)比觀點(diǎn)的傳統(tǒng)三段式文體,雖然看起來(lái)在難度上有所降低,對(duì)于考生來(lái)說(shuō),可能會(huì)采用事先背過(guò)的模板,比如說(shuō)都是Some people believe that..., others believe that ...這樣老套的句式,千篇一律,嚴(yán)重影響考生作文的分?jǐn)?shù)。但在這里提醒廣大考生,按照新的閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)和閱卷教師的反饋的信息,模板作文的得分普遍比較低,而且現(xiàn)在的老師有反模板的傾向,因此,這種正反觀點(diǎn)的體裁表面上是難度降低了,但是反而對(duì)考生提出了更高的要求,要求考生在表達(dá)上具有多樣性,要有閃光點(diǎn),要求考生在平時(shí)備考中注重基本功的培養(yǎng),摒棄模板,同時(shí),對(duì)于校園內(nèi)的話題,包括學(xué)習(xí)類,生活類,娛樂(lè)類等要多觀察,多積累素材,這樣才能在寫作這個(gè)項(xiàng)目中取得高分。