The new suburban life is fast becoming a predominant pattern of living in most cities; and with the improvement of traffic and the perfection of services, it will prove to hold great superiority over city life.
謀篇布局(2)
- 根據(jù)話題加引段,于段尾提出自己的觀點(diǎn)(也就是提示中的第三句要求內(nèi)容)
- 將提示的第一句和第二句寫成文章的中心段落
- 根據(jù)文章的敘述重點(diǎn),總結(jié)全文,提出方法等。
例證
標(biāo)題: My View on College Students' Part-time Jobs
提綱:1)有人認(rèn)為大學(xué)生做兼職工作很有好處;
2)然而,有人認(rèn)為大學(xué)生做兼職工作弊多利少;
3)我的看法
Nowadays, an increasing number of college students are doing part-time jobs. People hold different opinions on that.
Some people think that there are many advantages for college students to have part-time jobs. Firstly, part-time jobs offer them opportunities to apply what they have learned in school and demonstrate their abilities.
Secondly, it enables them to be more independent of their family and builds up their self-confidence. Thirdly, part-time experiences may be of great help to their future careers. Finally, part-time jobs can broaden their college lives and help them know more of themselves and society.
However, some other people hold that doing part-time jobs has more disadvantages. The main job of college students is to study, not to work. If they have part-time jobs, they may have to reduce their time for sleep, rest, study and activities. Working several hours a day consumes a lot of time and energy and may affect their studies. As a result, they may find it hard to adjust to what the college expects of them as well as their employers expect, and finally, they may fall behind or fail in their studies.
In my opinion, students can choose to take up a part-time job according to their own situation. The most important thing for them is to keep a good balance between part-time jobs and his study.
謀篇布局(3)
- 將提示的第一句和第二句合為第一段,于段尾提出自己的觀點(diǎn);
- 說(shuō)明自己的理由;
- 結(jié)論段總結(jié)全文
例文
標(biāo)題:How to Achieve Success
提綱:1)有人說(shuō)成功主要靠運(yùn)氣;
2)有人則認(rèn)為成功主要靠勤奮,與運(yùn)氣毫無(wú)關(guān)系;
3)我的觀點(diǎn)
Some people say the key to success is the luck, while others claim it is hard work. As far as I am concerned, there are many factors contributing to success and the three fundamental ones are diligence, devotion and perseverance.
Diligence is the first key factor to success. Diligence helps us remove ignorance, overcome difficulties, and enlighten our minds. It makes a fool wise, and a poor man rich. Devotion is another factor to success. Whatever we do, we must love it and do it whole-heartedly. Only when we set our minds on the job, can we do it well. Furthermore, perseverance, or a strong will, is the last key to success. Without a strong will, we are likely to give up when we meet some difficulties, let alone perform wonderful deeds.
To conclude, all great men achieve success through diligence, devotion and perseverance. Just as the famous saying goes, 'No pains, no gains', 'Where there is a will, there is a way.'
謀篇布局(4)
將提示中的第一句做為第一段主題句,然后拓展開
將提示的第二句做為第二段的主題句,拓展說(shuō)明
將提示的第三句拓展成第三段,但注意與上面兩段的照應(yīng),使其有總攬全文的作用
例文
標(biāo)題:On Housing Reform
提示:1)舊房屋政策的弊端;
2)房改帶來(lái)的好處;
3)我怎么辦?
The old house-allotting policy had at least two disadvantages. First, the government spent a lot of money building some houses, but these houses were allotted to people free of charge. Thus, the government would have no money to build more houses for people who badly needed them. Second, the persons who were in power could get more houses than those who were powerless. This was quite unfair.
On the contrary, the new system of house allotment may bring about many new things. For example, the government will have more money which can be used in house construction. So, the housing industry can develop more quickly. Besides, because houses will be sold to people, the chances they get will be equal.