前兩天的四級(jí)考試中，四級(jí)作文之一為溝通方式的改變，通過(guò)審題我們首先要確定該篇作文的題型應(yīng)為議論文，之后根據(jù)議論文的寫(xiě)作形式，制定寫(xiě)作思路，并從正反兩方面進(jìn)行論證，最后表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。下面是小編整理的這次四級(jí)考試中關(guān)于2020年12月四級(jí)作文分析之溝通方式的改變的資料，希望對(duì)你有所幫助。
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write on the topic Changes in the Way of Communication. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
首先，通過(guò)仔細(xì)審題發(fā)現(xiàn)，今年12月份的四級(jí)作文真題之一是一篇比較典型的議論文寫(xiě)作，根據(jù)所給的文字提綱，我們需要寫(xiě)的話題是“溝通方式的改變”。
其次，確定為議論文之后，我們需要就這一主題，聯(lián)系我們現(xiàn)代社會(huì)的交流和通訊方式所發(fā)生的變化，形成我們基本的寫(xiě)作思路。字?jǐn)?shù)要求為120 -180字的議論文，我們可以采取總分總的結(jié)構(gòu)，分為三段。
第一段為現(xiàn)象的陳述，敘述由于互聯(lián)網(wǎng)技術(shù)的發(fā)展和手機(jī)的普及，越來(lái)越多的人開(kāi)始依賴互聯(lián)網(wǎng)和手機(jī)進(jìn)行交流溝通， 越來(lái)越忽略面對(duì)面交流。
第二段可以展開(kāi)討論這種溝通方式的改變，也就是利用手機(jī)和互聯(lián)網(wǎng)交流的積極和消極的影響。從積極方面來(lái)說(shuō)，線上交流拉近了人們之間的關(guān)系，通過(guò)即時(shí)的通訊，人們可以隨時(shí)隨地溝通和交流，哪怕是距離遙遠(yuǎn)的朋友和親人。從消極方面來(lái)說(shuō)，一部分人會(huì)沉溺于線上交流，而忽略了面對(duì)面的交流，忽略了和身邊人的情感交流。交流通訊方式的改變給人們帶來(lái)了疏遠(yuǎn)感。
第三段我們可以承認(rèn)通訊方式的改變給我們帶來(lái)了好處，同時(shí)提出不應(yīng)該忽略新的交流方式產(chǎn)生的消極影響。建議人們應(yīng)該更重視面對(duì)面交流。
總體上來(lái)說(shuō)，議論文的正反討論有助于我們?cè)趯?xiě)作過(guò)程中更全面地表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)，在結(jié)尾段承認(rèn)和進(jìn)一步發(fā)展的好處，針對(duì)消極影響提出建議。
范文
Nowadays, great changes have taken place in the way of communication. With the continuous advancement of science and technology, the mobile phone has become an indispensable tool in our daily life. People in mounting numbers indulge in the communication through mobile phones, becoming increasingly unaware of face-to-face communication and estranged from each other.
On the one hand, undoubtedly, online communication through the mobile phone and internet provides us with considerable convenience and enables us to be closer than ever before. For example, it is easier to for us to keep in touch with far-away friends and relatives. On the other hand, our reliance on mobile phones has negative effects on our personal life. People are so addicted to online communication that they ignore face-to-face communication. Although scientific and technological advancement brings us a number of benefits, it has provoked a sense of alienation among people.
In conclusion, enjoying the convenience provided by the new way of communication, we should bear in mind that human beings are social beings who need real interpersonal interactions. Joint efforts are needed to ensure people to have face-to-face communication.
