話題七：運動與健康 Writing 4 高考英語高分范文4

Writing 4 ?。?010年上海市高三英語二模（徐匯區(qū)）］下圖是某高中2014年與2016年學生健康狀況調查數據圖。請簡要介紹一下學生健康的變化情況，分析其原因并提出相應的改進措施。

高分范文4

A recent survey aimed at high school students' health situation in 2014 and 2016 apparently alert people to the physical and mental condition of students．As we can see from the chart，short sight and lack of sleep have increased by nearly 10 percent，while overweight and mental problems by almost 15 percent．Now approximately nine-tenths of high school students suffer from being nearsighted and lack of sleep．

From my point of view，two main factors contribute to it．On one hand，the ever increasing academic stress has been keeping the students at the desk all the time，which leads to lack of rest and sports activities．The tense also poses a threat at their psychological health，causing unstable emotions．On the other hand，unhealthy lifestyle，such as staying up all night，playing with web games for hours，and replacing main meals with fast food，is also affecting their health condition．

Therefore，the approach to this problem can be as follows．The students should try changing their unhealthy lifestyle and spare more time to take sports or relax themselves in the open air．This will relieve their stress and help them both mentally and physically．At the same time，the school should try to lighten the academic burden and give students more leisure time．Not only we are all looking forward to school graduates who is excellent in study but also have a good mind and body！