My Best Friend
我最好的朋友
My best friend is one of my classmates. Her name is Mary. Every day, we go to school together and go back home together. We often help each other and learn from each other in study.
我最好的朋友是我的一個(gè)同班同學(xué),她的名字叫瑪麗。我們每天一起上學(xué),一起回家。我們經(jīng)?;ハ鄮椭?,并向?qū)Ψ綄W(xué)習(xí)。
We have the same hobby-collecting stamps. She has many nice stamps. She is very proud of them. Sometimes she gives some of them to me. I think she is a very good girl. We will be good friends forever.
我們有著相同的愛(ài)好——集郵。她有很多漂亮的郵票,并為此十分自豪。有時(shí),她會(huì)把其中的一些郵票給我。我認(rèn)為她是個(gè)非常好的女孩。我們會(huì)成為永遠(yuǎn)的朋友。
點(diǎn)評(píng):這是一篇記人的敘述文。先交代了My Best Friend是誰(shuí),接著通過(guò)事例交代了為什么“我們是最好的朋友”。最后闡述了主題。