中考英語(yǔ)滿分作文:英語(yǔ)回信（開(kāi)導(dǎo)）

 英語(yǔ)回信（開(kāi)導(dǎo)）

假定你是蘇華，最近你的澳大利亞筆友Nathan犯了一些錯(cuò)誤，倍感懊惱，寫(xiě)了一封郵件向你訴說(shuō)，為幫助他排解困感，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)他的郵件內(nèi)容并結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷．用英語(yǔ)回信開(kāi)導(dǎo)他。

To：[email protected]

From：nathan.australia.com

Subjects： Learning from mistakes

 Dear Su Hue,

    I'm unhappy that I've made some mistakes recently. They're troubling me a lot these days. I really need your help. Would you please share your experience with me?

u   Do you agree that everyone makes mistakes?

uCan you tell me one of your mistakes?

uHow did you deal with your problem?

uWhat have you learned from the mistake?

I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.

All the best,

Nathan

注意： l.詞數(shù)90左右。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞量；

       2．回復(fù)須包括所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；

      3．文中不得提及真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。

【參考范文】

Dear Nathan,

    I'm sorry to know that you are not happythese days. You needn't worry too much. It's true that everyone makes mistakes.

    Take me, for example. One day, I spent somuch time playing football with my friends that I forgot to do my homework. Isaid sorry to my teacher and finished it the next day. I found it important toachieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies.

    It doesn't matter whether or not you makemistakes. What matters most is to correct and learn from them. In this way,others will understand you. Then you will feel much better.

    I hope my experience can help you out.

Best wishes.

Su Hua

親愛(ài)的拿單,

知道你這幾天不開(kāi)心，我很難過(guò)。你不必太擔(dān)心。每個(gè)人都會(huì)犯錯(cuò)，這是事實(shí)。

以我為例。一天，我花了很多時(shí)間和我的朋友踢足球，我忘了做我的家庭作業(yè)。我向老師道歉，第二天就完成了。我發(fā)現(xiàn)在學(xué)業(yè)和愛(ài)好之間取得平衡很重要。

你是否犯錯(cuò)誤并不重要。最重要的是改正錯(cuò)誤并從中學(xué)習(xí)。這樣，別人才會(huì)理解你。這樣你就會(huì)感覺(jué)好多了。

我希望我的經(jīng)驗(yàn)?zāi)軒偷侥恪?/p>

最好的祝福。

蘇華