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前 言:
教習(xí)過好幾門課程,深感寫作這一課是最難教的,“危乎高哉!‘寫作’之難難于上青天。……一夫當(dāng)關(guān),萬夫莫開。”學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)英語寫作多時(shí),大多不能迥脫蹊徑之外,工而入逸者更是寥寥。于是我悲觀起來,認(rèn)定“文不可以‘教’而能”。雖說文字和技法可以也應(yīng)當(dāng)教一些,俾學(xué)生邯鄲學(xué)步,漸次入門,但就本質(zhì)特征而論,寫作遠(yuǎn)不只是一個(gè)章法和技巧的問題,而是“氣之所行”,是皮相之下許多深層主觀因素的綜合,是一個(gè)厚積薄發(fā)的養(yǎng)成過程。這些主觀因素,在我看來,體現(xiàn)在國(guó)內(nèi)的英語寫作考試當(dāng)中只局限于素心爛讀的積累。Reading makes a full man.這是英國(guó)學(xué)者的傳世之言,我們的祖先說“讀書破萬卷,下筆如有神”。我們贊嘆一篇文章,往往是因?yàn)槲覀儽晃恼轮械恼Z言所吸引、所征服:語匯豐富、句式整齊、語言或精練或華麗,句式安排熟練自如,自然流暢;而者只能來自于 reading。但是我們已沒有那么多的時(shí)間去“讀”了,于是乎,語言的總結(jié)就變得極其必要!
要?dú)w納記敘文中漂亮、地道的語言是困難的,但是要?dú)w納論說文這個(gè)各種英語考試的作文類型中的語言不是不可能的。論說文是由開頭、結(jié)尾、啟轉(zhuǎn)、分析、舉例、比較等部分所組成的,其中都有些固定而漂亮的句型來表達(dá)。由于這些句型都是地道的英語,是經(jīng)過千錘百煉,且能表達(dá)論說文寫作中的不同意思,若能把以論說文為主的當(dāng)代英語essays中的這些句型摘錄歸納成類,供讀者參考,無疑是能有助于提高英語寫作的語言水平。
模仿和學(xué)用漂亮和地道的英語表達(dá)法或句型并不是可恥的事。地道的英語不應(yīng)是你用學(xué)過的詞匯和語法規(guī)則按某個(gè)意思苦苦思索造出來的,地道的英語應(yīng)是你把英美人對(duì)這個(gè)意思的習(xí)慣說法用到你自己的文章上來的。該講義收集了論說文常用的一些句型,與六級(jí)考試的一些文章結(jié)構(gòu)模式;希望同學(xué)們能以此為依據(jù),Practice makes perfect,達(dá)到熟能生巧的境界,從而在六級(jí)考試作文部分獲得理想的分?jǐn)?shù)!
寫作原則
內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)單化
結(jié)構(gòu)模式化(主題句-分論點(diǎn)-總結(jié))
語言要包裝
錯(cuò)誤要回避
萬能理由 (Omnipotence):
1、方便:convenient/convenience
2、效率:efficient/efficiently/efficiency
3、節(jié)省和浪費(fèi):save time/money/space; economical, thrift
waste time/money/space; costly, lavish
4:人的心理健康:independent, cooperative, competitive,
considerate, confident, creative, sociable,
perseverance; selfish, isolated, conservative
5、人的身體健康:health, disease, strong, strength, energetic
6、娛樂:colorful, pleasure, joy, recreation, entertainment, relax
tired, boring, lonely
7、環(huán)境:environment, pollute, poisonous, dirty
8、安全和危險(xiǎn):safe, danger, risk
9:經(jīng)驗(yàn):experience, social experience, enter the society
10、人際:humane, fair, unfair, help, assist, freedom, freely
基本表達(dá)(Basic Elements of English Writing):
越來越:be increasingly + adj., be on the rise, the growing number of
人們認(rèn)為:it is generally/widely believed/held/agreed that
許多問題:a host of/a number of problems
引起人們注意:claim call/attract general/public/world attention to sth.
意識(shí)到:there is a growing awareness/realization of/that, awaken sb. to the fact/danger
適應(yīng)新的形勢(shì)/變化:adapt/adjust/accommodate oneself to new environment/change
接觸各種思想/經(jīng)歷:be exposed to new ideas/experiences/problems
接觸社會(huì):come into frequent/close contact with the world/society
獲得成功:achieve/accomplish success
提出觀點(diǎn)/建議:advance / put forward / come up with the arguments/ideas/suggestions
作出努力:make tremendous/persistent/sustained effort to do sth., take great pains to do(with work/study)
影響學(xué)習(xí)/工作:interfere with studies/work
產(chǎn)生影響:have/exert a profound influence on life/personality, have a dramatic/undesirable effect on
較好地駕馭生活:be a better pilot of one's life
剝奪機(jī)會(huì)/權(quán)力:deprive oneself of the chance/right/opportunity
取代就的方式:substitute for/take the place of the old way
采取措施:take effective steps/measures to
控制我們的環(huán)境:take/gain increasing control over our own environment
躲避危險(xiǎn)/挑戰(zhàn):shy/run away from the dangers/challenge
滿足要求:meet/satisfy/accommodate the demand of
補(bǔ)償損失:compensate for/make up for the loss/damage
解釋某現(xiàn)象:account for/explain the phenomenon
對(duì)……很好的了解:have a better understanding/appreciation of, have a new perspective on. provide/gain an insight into
把某因素考慮進(jìn)去:take sth. Into account(consideration), give much thought to
品位人生/自由/青春:savor the life/freedom/youth
培養(yǎng)對(duì)……的信心:develop/foster one's interest/confidence in
經(jīng)歷變化/困難/艱險(xiǎn):undergo/experience great changes/hardships/experience
表現(xiàn)出自信心等:project one's confidence/feeling/image
生活充滿不公正的地方:life is full of minor irritation/injustice
追求學(xué)習(xí)/職業(yè):pursue one's academic interest/professional career
學(xué)習(xí)知識(shí)/技術(shù):pursue/acquire knowledge/technology/skill
被看作學(xué)習(xí)的……榜樣:be held up as a good example
交流經(jīng)驗(yàn)/知識(shí):share experience/ideas/problems/knowledge
發(fā)揮/起到重要作用:play an (important/active/great) role/part
逃學(xué)/缺課:skip school/a class/a meeting/a lecture
知識(shí)/經(jīng)驗(yàn)豐富:rich in knowledge/experience
確立/追求目標(biāo):set/pursue a goal/higher standard
到達(dá)目標(biāo):achieve/accomplish/stain the goal/aim/objective
克服困難:overcome obstacles/difficulty
面臨危險(xiǎn)/困難:be confronted/faced with/in the face of danger/difficulty
阻礙了成功:stand in the way of success, be an obstacle/barrier to success/growth
阻礙了發(fā)展:hamper/impede/stunt the development of
持傳統(tǒng)的看法:hold conventional wisdom
發(fā)表看法:voice/express one's opinion
持相反/合理的觀點(diǎn):take the opposite/fresh view
揭穿某種一貫的說法:shatter the myth of
求得幫助:enlist one's support/help
縮小差別:bridge/narrow/fill the gap/gulf (between city and country)
把成功/錯(cuò)誤歸咎于:attribute/own the success/failure to
對(duì)……重要:be indispensable/important/vital to
施加壓力:put/exert a academic pressure on
重視:assign/attach much importance/significance to
強(qiáng)調(diào):place/put much emphasis/stress/value on
把注意力集中在:focus/concentrate one's attention/efforts/thoughts upon
提供機(jī)會(huì)/信息:provide/offer/furnish an opportunity/information for sb.
抓住機(jī)會(huì):grab/seize/take the opportunity
得到機(jī)會(huì):enjoy/gain access to a opportunity/information
有可能:there is (little/much) possibility/likelihood that, chances/the odds are that
展開競(jìng)爭(zhēng):compete against/with sb. for the prize/position/control/the mastery of
開展運(yùn)動(dòng):conduct(carryon/undertake/initiate/launch/wage) a (vigorous/nation-wide/publicity/advertising) campaign (for/against)
對(duì)我很有/沒有什么意義:make much/little sense to me
帶來無窮的幸福/滿足:be a source of happiness satisfaction/contentment/pride/complaint
獻(xiàn)身于:devote/dedicate/commit oneself to a cause/career
大不(沒什么)兩樣:make much(little/no) difference
真正重要的是:what really matters/accounts is …
改變生活旅程:change/alter the course of life
建立在大量的學(xué)習(xí)/實(shí)踐上:built on tremendous amount of study/practice
進(jìn)行調(diào)查/執(zhí)行任務(wù):conduct/carry out an study/task/experiment
辭去工作/學(xué)習(xí):leave/quit one's job/work/school
參加考試/競(jìng)賽等:enter (for) the examination/contest, race
參加活動(dòng)/討論:take part/participate/be engaged in sports/activities/discussion
影響思想/態(tài)度/事件的形成:shape one's thinking/attitude
進(jìn)入大學(xué)/社會(huì)/家庭/勞力市場(chǎng)/職業(yè):enter a school/college/society/the work force/professionals
實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的理想/愿望:realize/fulfill/achieve one's dream(hops/wish/desire)
減輕壓力/緊張:reduce/alleviate/relieve the stress/pressure/tension
提高社會(huì)地位:enhance/improve/upgrade social status/position/standing rise to the position of leadership
提高技術(shù)/能力:sharpen (increase/improve/enhance/boost) one's skill/ability
加快/促進(jìn)發(fā)展:accelerate/facilitate/advance/enhance/boost the development of
隨著生活節(jié)奏的加快:with the quickening pace/rhythm/tempo of modern life/society
開闊眼界/興趣:broaden one's interest/outlook, expand(broaden/enlarge) one's mental horizons
有助于了解/發(fā)展/宣傳/解決:contribute much/little/greatly/to a better understanding of/the popularity of/the growth of/the solution of
有助于解決問題:go a long way to(towards) solving the problem
迷戀名利/分?jǐn)?shù):be obsessed/preoccupied with grades/fame/fortune
把時(shí)間花/浪費(fèi)在:spend/waste time doing sth., put in hours doing sth.
利用機(jī)會(huì)/技術(shù):make (full/better) use of/take advantage of opportunity/time, tap/harness technology potential/skills/talent
把知識(shí)/經(jīng)驗(yàn)運(yùn)用到…:apply/put the theory/knowledge/experience… to practice/daily life/good use
取得進(jìn)步:make much progress/strides/gains in
充分發(fā)揮潛力/能力:develop one's ability/potential to the full, give full play to one's ability
充滿激情/渴望:have a burning desire/a great passion for