2014年12月英語(yǔ)四級(jí)作文真題：印象最深的大學(xué)同學(xué)

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　　滬江網(wǎng)校版：

　　?A classmate of yours who has influenced you most in college

　　Rose is my roommate, classmate and my best friend in my college. She has a round face and a little plump. One can always find a nice smile on her face, which reflects her amiable and pleasant character. Our friendship attributes to her great influence on me.

　　In terms of study, she is good at English, while English is not my cup of tea. When I am confused about teacher’s explanation of texts, she always interprets them to me in an explicit way. I really appreciate her help. Besides, she also imparts me a few language learning tips and recommendations which arouse my learning interest.

　　In addition, in the leisure time, she helps me a lot as well. Because I am not the local student and my hometown is far away from here, sometimes I feel homesick. However, I always have Rose on my side. Her accompany gives me great comfort.

　　I feel so lucky that I could have such a good friend, who teaches me and help me in my study and leisure life, so she is the classmate that has influenced me most in college.

　　新東方在線版1：

　　新東方金凌虹老師范文：

　　I have met so many friends in my college life. They have exerted enormous influence on my life. However, one of my most impressive friends is my roommate, Li Ming.

　　In the class meeting on the first day of school, Li Ming did not impress us at all. We started to notice him because he was always late for classes. We were thus impressed by his laziness. I came to know him and his situation because we were roommates and spent much time together: his mother was seriously ill and sick abed in long-term, his father left him and his mother mercilessly. Hence, it was him that shouldered the heavy burden of taking care of his sick mother supporting the whole family. Finally, under great pressures, he balanced his life and study perfectly: he was no longer always late, took good care of his mother and even won the scholarship many years in a row.

　　The experience of Li Ming can be one of the most convincing cases of the power of persistence and will. He left a deep impression and imposed a durable influence on me. Indeed, friend such as him can be regarded as asset and property in our life. We have rights to choose our own friends，but we should also be prudent and sensible enough to choose friends who can bring us “positive energy”. (228 words)

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　　在我的大學(xué)生活中，遇到了很多朋友。他們對(duì)我的人生產(chǎn)生了重大的影響。然而，我印象最深的朋友是我的室友李明。

　　在開(kāi)學(xué)第一天的入學(xué)班會(huì)上，他沒(méi)有給全班同學(xué)留下任何印象。李明讓我們開(kāi)始認(rèn)識(shí)他，是因?yàn)樗偸巧险n遲到，同學(xué)們都以為是個(gè)懶惰的人。因?yàn)槲覀兪鞘矣眩綍r(shí)的交往比較多，后來(lái)我才慢慢了解到他的情況：原來(lái)他的母親罹患重病，長(zhǎng)期臥床，父親殘忍地離開(kāi)他們而去，照顧生病的母親和養(yǎng)家重任只能由他來(lái)承擔(dān)了。令人驚訝的是，在重壓之下，他將自己的生活和學(xué)業(yè)平衡地很好：他不再總是遲到，將媽媽照顧的很好并且連續(xù)幾年獲得獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金。

　　李明的經(jīng)歷是堅(jiān)持和意志的作用的最有說(shuō)服力的例子之一。他給我留下的印象無(wú)法磨滅，他對(duì)我造成的影響持續(xù)深遠(yuǎn)。的確，這樣的朋友被視為我們生活中的財(cái)富和資產(chǎn)。我們有權(quán)利選擇自己的朋友，然而交友的過(guò)程中，我都應(yīng)該足夠理智和謹(jǐn)慎，選擇那些能夠給我們帶來(lái)正能量的真正的朋友。

　　新東方在線版2：

　　A classmate of yours who has influenced you most in college

　　In our whole life, we can meet various people but the one who affected me most shows up in college. She is my roommate, Linda.

　　The reasons why I said that can be seen as follows. First and foremost,she is very hard-studying. Every morning she practices oral English no matter what the weather is like, even in cold winter, it is still dark outside and students are sleeping sound. What's more, she is ready to help anyone. Her stores in our class is the highest, and she always assists those who are left behind in class. What's important, on weekends, she goes to nursing home to help senior citizens to wash their clothes and teach them some English words.

　　All the evidence supports an unshakable conclusion that what she did teach me how to live a meaningful life, and I believe anyone should follow her. Only in this way can we have a promising future and rosy life.

　　(沈陽(yáng)新東方學(xué)校-王宏老師)

　　文都教育版：

　　The Most Impressive Classmate in My College

　　Without question, Lisa is the person who has influenced my college life most. She is my classmate, who always leaves a deep impression on you by demonstrating her passion for life and the spirit of never yielding, even in the face of extreme challenges. She is the most courageous person I have ever known.

　　During my college years, it is Lisa that kept teaching me how to live through setbacks in the life journey. I’ll never forget that when I failed in my English examination and I felt overwhelmed, Lisa taught me that failure teaches success, everyone had to persevere and face up to innumerable setbacks, as long as I face my problems bravely, I would create my own wonderful life . With her help , I finally gained the confidence and passed the exam.

　　Thanks to Lisa, I have learned the importance of courage, which is the indispensable characteristic in my life. She also let me know the importance of confidence. It means a lot to me and still in my head till this day.

　　范文譯文：

　　毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)，Lisa是大學(xué)里對(duì)我影響最深的一名同學(xué)。她是我同桌，她對(duì)生活的激情以及面臨極端困境時(shí)永不服輸?shù)木裼肋h(yuǎn)都能給人留下深刻的印象。她是我見(jiàn)過(guò)的最勇敢的女生。

　　在我的大學(xué)生涯中，是Lisa一直教導(dǎo)我如何面對(duì)生活中的挫折。我永遠(yuǎn)都不會(huì)忘記，當(dāng)我沒(méi)通過(guò)英語(yǔ)考試，灰心喪氣時(shí)，是她教給我，失敗是成功之母，每個(gè)人都會(huì)遇到無(wú)數(shù)的困難，都應(yīng)堅(jiān)持，只要我勇敢面對(duì)困難，我肯定能迎來(lái)自己美好的生活。在她的幫助下，我最終找回了自信，通過(guò)了考試。

　　多謝Lisa，讓我學(xué)到了勇氣的重要性，這是我性格中不可或缺的一部分。她同時(shí)也教會(huì)了我自信的重要性。這一切對(duì)我意義非凡，至今難忘。