2021年6月六級寫作解析
這次六級寫作考了圖表作文,有些出乎意料???a href="http://m.42bites.com/ielts/" target="_blank" class="keylink">雅思的同學是不是感覺似曾相識?不過,六級作文和雅思小作文還是有很大區(qū)別的。從題目的寫作要求可以看出,考生不僅要把圖表解釋清楚,還要對圖表內(nèi)容作出自己的評價,也就是說,還要給出自己的見解。
考察的題目都屬于中國的成就,包括脫貧,城市化進程和高等教育的發(fā)展。在描述圖標后,考生可以從列舉現(xiàn)象和分析原因2方面來寫。
作文依然采用三步走(總分總)的寫作框架。第一段描述圖表;第二段列舉現(xiàn)象或分析原因;第三段總結(jié)概括。
這里是一篇范文供大家參考。
The bar chartissued by Ministry of Education containsthe gross enrolment ratio in higher education in China from 3.4% in the year of 1990 to 51.6% in 2019. Obviously, what it endeavors / tries to convey is thatthis era has witnessed an enormous increase in China's higher education development.
As far as I am concerned, the increase is due to three main reasons. Firstly,the government has provided a series of beneficial policies and financial investment in ensuring citizens the opportunity of receiving higher education. Students, even poor ones in rural counties will be encouraged to attend universities after middle school. Interest-free loans are provided to students who cannot afford the fees. Secondly,the growing per capita GDP has shifted parents' opinion from earning money as soon as their children grow up to equipping them with more specialized knowledge for long-term development. Last but not least,due to the research achievements and the improvement of educationlevel, China's institutions of higher education are now highly admitted. We can find from the QS World University Ranking list that Qinghua University and Beijing University have peaked in this year.
In a nutshell, China has witnessed a great progress in its higher education, which enables more citizens to achieve a higher degree and provides more specialized knowledge in pursuing a fulfilling life.
范文使用了老師講過的框架。劃線部分是可以套用的模板,大家根據(jù)話題把要展開的內(nèi)容填補進去就可以了。注意在列舉原因或現(xiàn)象時可以從不同角度切入,如范文分別從政府、家長和學校三個方面展開。
以上,祝大家能夠取得理想的成績。