托福獨(dú)立寫作應(yīng)該避免的四種開頭方式

　　俗話說(shuō)“題好文一半”，一個(gè)好的托福寫作開頭的重要性不言而喻。 大家都希望能通過(guò)好的開頭，可以吸引考官的注意，從而使他對(duì)你的作文有個(gè)好印象，可是，如果開頭十分糟糕，它便足以“完美”地禍害這次托福考試。下面是考試專家為考生們總結(jié)的應(yīng)避免的開頭方式。

　　1、廢話連篇急煞讀者

　　失敗案例：

　　Topic --Should college students be allowed to get married?

　　This topic is very interesting. I am very interested in talking about this topic. Because I am also a college student and I am not married……

　　修改方案：開門見山 直奔主題

　　In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married。

　　2、觀點(diǎn)不明態(tài)度曖昧

　　失敗案例：

　　Topic--Should college students be allowed to get married?

　　I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……

　　3、漸行漸遠(yuǎn) 離題千里

　　失敗案例：

　　Topic---It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

　　I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places。

　　4、中式英語(yǔ)人見人跪

　　失敗案例：

　　Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life

　　In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……

　　Topic 2- The population problem

　　The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there。

　　Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?

　　I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chop when I go out buy things……

　　Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

　　Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a person always does bad things, he will get “baoying”。