托福寫作素材資料庫(kù)之科技篇

托?？谡Z(yǔ)備考練習(xí)方法總結(jié)內(nèi)容如下：

Do you agree or disagree：It is better to wait in patience than take action? 等待比成功更加重要是否認(rèn)同?

主題觀點(diǎn)：一邊倒支持起而行動(dòng)。

思路拓展：為何成功來(lái)著專注和努力，而不是空懷夢(mèng)想，無(wú)謂等待。

1. 企業(yè)家創(chuàng)業(yè)的故事，叔叔保羅為例，新產(chǎn)業(yè)是一片藍(lán)海的時(shí)候去勇敢做第一個(gè)吃螃蟹的人(嘗試的人)，才能成功，對(duì)比的是，行業(yè)是一片紅海的時(shí)候，再次入行，競(jìng)爭(zhēng)激勵(lì)，難以成功。

2. 兒童學(xué)習(xí)外語(yǔ)，很多父母有眼光，讓他們贏在起跑線。

3. 戀愛(ài)的故事, 成功太慢，幸福減半。

作家立場(chǎng)：5%的成功者和95%的平凡者的最大的區(qū)別在于成功者會(huì)在目標(biāo)設(shè)定后在最短的時(shí)間里采取最大量的行動(dòng)，就是所謂：行勝于言，贏在執(zhí)行。

原創(chuàng)語(yǔ)料庫(kù)：

1. Success comes from focus and effort， instead of cherishing rosy dreams and waiting in vain 成功來(lái)著專注和努力，而不是空懷夢(mèng)想，徒勞等待。

2. Frustrations and hardships are always there waiting for you 人生總是充滿了挫折和困苦。

解析：frustrate v 使挫敗

拓展：frustration n 挫敗

3. stand out from the rest = stand out in a crowd 出類拔萃

拓展：outstanding = exceptional = eminent 優(yōu)秀的

4. realize one’s dream = fulfill one’s ambition 實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想

5. Only with a clear goal, a strong will-power, prompt efforts can a person put all the challenges under the feet and taste the sweetness of life. 我相信有了清晰的頭腦，堅(jiān)定的意志力，即刻的努力;我們才能戰(zhàn)勝所有的挑戰(zhàn)，品味生活的甜美。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：prompt efforts 即刻的努力

拓展：tips = to insure prompt service 為了保障及時(shí)的服務(wù)

6. When facing with unexpected adversity，one needs great take actions and seize opportunities 面對(duì)困難，人需用即刻行動(dòng)，把握行動(dòng)。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：論據(jù)一或者論據(jù)二的觀點(diǎn)句

7. We have no choice but to brave all the challenges and learn how to deal with adversity. 我們應(yīng)該面對(duì)困難，學(xué)習(xí)如何應(yīng)對(duì)逆境。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：have no choice but to do sth = have to do sth 只能做 ……

8. For instance, I encountered great difficulties in competing with top students in an English oral competition，however，I spared no hesitation to make efforts everyday, with great confidence and full preparation, I successfully stood out from other contestants in English speech contest. 例如，我在參加英語(yǔ)演講比賽的時(shí)候，遇到了很大困難，但是，我日日努力，毫不猶豫，擁有自信和充分準(zhǔn)備后，我在英語(yǔ)比賽中脫穎而出。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：個(gè)人努力，及時(shí)行動(dòng)，實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想。

拓展：我想?yún)⒓佑⒄Z(yǔ)比賽，但是猶豫，強(qiáng)手太多，我還要充分準(zhǔn)備，但是，老師保羅鼓勵(lì)我用煩惱的時(shí)間解決問(wèn)題，努力從現(xiàn)在開(kāi)始，我頓然醒悟(馬上明白)，用心專一，起而行動(dòng)，才能縮短和夢(mèng)距離。

9. Failure reveals the prelude of success. 失敗是成功之母。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：reveal v揭示了，prelude n序幕

10. All the difficulties will be stamped under your feet.所有的困難被你踩到腳下。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：collect stamps 集郵;stamp v 跺腳

11. Action speaks louder than words 行動(dòng)勝過(guò)言語(yǔ)

12. The debate reminds me of my Paul, who is a successful business leader ……叔叔是成功的企業(yè)家，創(chuàng)業(yè)時(shí)尚酒店，起初，創(chuàng)業(yè)前景不確定，但是，叔叔毅然創(chuàng)業(yè)，經(jīng)營(yíng)酒店，賺取人生財(cái)富。

13. Indeed, I have to concede that sometime being patient could help us avoid potential dangers and losses 耐心規(guī)避潛在的風(fēng)險(xiǎn)和損失。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：Indeed， I have to concede that 我承認(rèn)的是 ……

14. however，I want to rebut that …… 但是，我想反駁的是 ……

15. Opportunity knocks but only once 機(jī)不可失失不再來(lái)。

16. …… steal us the splendid opportunity of embracing a bright future 使得我們錯(cuò)失了擁抱美好未來(lái)的寶貴機(jī)會(huì)。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：耐心等待的潛在弊端。

17. The story of carving out one’s own career 自我創(chuàng)業(yè)的故事。

18. take a risk to give a try = pick up one’s courage to do sth 勇敢做第一個(gè)吃螃蟹的人

點(diǎn)評(píng)：按照語(yǔ)義理解的翻譯，經(jīng)典活潑的小詞。

19. new industry is a unexploited area 新產(chǎn)業(yè)是一片藍(lán)海的時(shí)候

點(diǎn)評(píng)：exploit v 開(kāi)發(fā)，利用，剝削

20. In marked contrast, it is useless and meaningless to dive into a saturated market 行業(yè)是一片紅海的時(shí)候, 再投入的沒(méi)有意義。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：a saturated market 飽和的市場(chǎng)

21. So fierce is the competition that one might find it hard to fulfill one’s ambition 競(jìng)爭(zhēng)激勵(lì)，難以成功。

22. The primary difference between the minority of great-achievers and the majority of mediocre people is that …… 5%的成功者和95%的平凡者的最大的區(qū)別在于……

解析：mediocre people = common people = ordinary people 平凡者

點(diǎn)評(píng)：寫作是創(chuàng)造，有時(shí)候不拘泥于細(xì)節(jié)，5% 可以寫作少數(shù)的，95%可以寫作多數(shù)的。

23. Convinced of the importance of a goal， a successful people will definitely take the utmost efforts to bridge the gap between dream and reality. Namely， action speaks louder than words and one can win via prompt implementation 成功者會(huì)在目標(biāo)設(shè)定后，會(huì)在最短的時(shí)間里采取最大量的行動(dòng)，就是所謂，行勝于言，贏在執(zhí)行。