托福寫作語言實例解析

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2017年01月01日

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　　教育類

　　Some people think that students should be encouraged to study those fields such as science, technology, engineering and mathematics rather than they have interest in. Do you agree or disagree?有人認為學生們應該學習科技，工程學，數學，而不是他們感興趣的課程，你是否認同這個觀點?(2016年11月5日)

　　相關題目

　　It is more important to choose to study a subject that interests you than a subject preparing you better for a job or career. Do you agree or disagree?學習感興趣的課程比學習有助于就業(yè)的課程更加重要，你是否同意這個觀點?( 2006年11月19日)

　　Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 有人認為學生們應該學習他們感興趣的科目，有人認為學生們應該學習對于未來有用的課程，討論兩種觀點，談及你的立場。

　　頭腦風暴

　　路遙在《人生》中寫道："人生的道路雖然漫長，但緊要處常常只有幾步，特別是當人年輕的時候。"每一種選擇都是一種取舍，人人都想隨心而活，活出精彩。但是，有時候我們在拒絕之前，要先向現(xiàn)實妥協(xié)，這就是為何很多大學生不得不放棄自己心愛的專業(yè)，而選擇一個便于就業(yè)的，有前程的專業(yè)。

　　是選擇便于就業(yè)的法律、會計還是心愛的中文、英語，小編也曾青春迷茫。但是，選你所愛，愛你所選，才能青春無悔，人生幸福。

　　寫作立場

　　和選擇實用性的課程相比，我更鼓勵童靴們學習自己喜愛的課程。

　　思路拓展

　　為何學習感興趣的課程

　　興趣是最好的老師，學習感興趣的課程可以激發(fā)學習熱情，開發(fā)一個人無限的潛能。

　　若非學習感興趣的課程，即使一個人找到一份賺錢的工作，也容易產生職業(yè)倦怠。

　　如果能把個人興趣和職業(yè)理想完美結合，這是一種人生的成功。

　　為何學習實用性的課程

　　教育是一種投資，每一個投資者渴望獲得高額回報，即一份穩(wěn)定高薪有前途的事業(yè)，以擇業(yè)為導向的課程更容易幫助人實現(xiàn)這個目標?！　?/p>

　　范文賞析

　　首段：背景介紹 + 爭議焦點 + 寫作立場

　　Education is one of the key words of our time, however, people's views differ greatly as to which should be the superior option of academic pursuit, to opt for courses conducing to future career or to focus on subjects that interest them. As I see it, compared with choosing subjects that can help young adults ready themselves for career challenges, to deliberately specialize in one's favorite courses is more commendable.

　　二段：反駁段：學習感興趣的課程的利好

　　Opting for the courses in which one takes considerable interest will enjoy more visible merits. First, one's study motivation can be highly stimulated provided that one can choose subjects exerting a peculiar fascination on him or her. Conversely, people might generate career burnout even if they might get profit-making jobs.

　　三段：反駁段：學習感興趣的課程的利好

　　Also, taking one's favorite subjects can fully tap his or her infinite potentials. Meanwhile, one can fully enjoy the process of learning and career life. Apart from that, it is also a sort of success if one can perfectly combine specialized knowledge with career ambition. Therefore, college students have sound reasons to select the courses that interest them.

　　四段：讓步段：學習實用性課程的利好

　　Indeed, I have to concede that the acquisition of pragmatic courses might still have some benefits. Sure enough, job-related courses will help one outshine many candidates and successfully secure a decent job. That is why some people feel that education is a kind of investment and competitive courses such as engineering, science and technology can, in most cases, earn high interests. Thereby, what some people are concerned about is whether the course of their choice can lead to a profitable career. After all, career-related subjects can lay a solid foundation for climbing the career ladder.

　　尾段：亮明觀點 + (總結理由)

　　In closing, I re-affirm my conviction that even though choosing utilitarian subjects is never without merit, university students should still be encouraged to choose their favorite areas of study.

　　變通表達

　　1.course = subject n.課程

　　2.career-oriented course = career-oriented subjects 以就業(yè)為導向的課程

　　3.take considerable interest in … = take keen interest in … 對于……很感興趣

　　4.secure a decent job = get a decent career 找到一份體面的工作

　　句法語料

　　1.conduce to … 有助于……

　　2.sure enough 的確

　　3.enjoy more visible merits 有更多的明顯的利好

　　4.to do sth. is more commendable 去做某事更加值得推薦

　　5.to do sth. deserves more recommendations 去做某事更加值得推薦

　　短語語料