托福寫作素材:共享單車

　　現(xiàn)在共享單車這么火，關(guān)于它們的表達(dá)同學(xué)們都清楚嗎?

　　共享單車(shared bikes)是現(xiàn)在在城市中非常流行的短途(short distance)出行工具, 因為它們的方便，健康環(huán)保，越來越多的人選擇共享單車出行。我們也來跟風(fēng)趁熱學(xué)學(xué)一些表達(dá)來積累些語料吧，要知道在我們托福考題中可使出現(xiàn)過不少類似交通工具的內(nèi)容哦～

　　首先我們來看看怎么描述共享單車，它們是怎么樣的一種存在呢?我們來看一篇關(guān)于它的新聞節(jié)選。

　　“ China’s craze for bike-sharing has brought more than 2m new bikes to its city streets. The brightly coloured bicycles, produced by companies such as Mobike and ofo, can be unlocked using mobile apps. Mobike’s models are even GPS-tracked.

　　中國的共享單車熱潮已為其城市的街頭巷尾增添了逾200萬輛新自行車。摩拜單車(Mobike)和ofo等公司推出的這些色彩鮮艷的自行車可用手機應(yīng)用解鎖。摩拜的自行車甚至可用GPS追蹤。

　　Unlike other sharing schemes around the world, China’s bicycles can be picked up and left anywhere, making them convenient for users but frustrating for city authorities

　　與全球其他共享項目不同，中國的共享單車可在任何地方取用和停放，雖然方便了用戶，但讓城市管理部門感到頭疼。

　　The bicycles are locked by the user after riding, and then unlocked by the next rider by using a mobile app and scanning a QR code on the frame.

　　用戶騎完共享單車后將之上鎖，下一個用戶可使用手機應(yīng)用掃描車身上的二維碼解鎖 ”

　　好了，看完上面這段話，請同學(xué)們試著找出關(guān)鍵詞，總結(jié)一下到底怎么介紹共享單車呢(shared bikes)?

　　我們可以這樣說，The shared bike is the most popular mode of transport for short distance recently especially among young citizens. They can be picked up and left anywhere, which is a great convenience for users. After you find one, you only need to scan a QR code on the frame to unlock it. After you get to the place, you can lock up the bike manually. It’s charged 0.5-1 RMB per hour. The 2 best-known and most widely used bikes are called Mobike and Ofo. You need to download their App , pay certain amount of deposit and then you are free to set off on the road. The bikes even have GPRS-Trackers on them so that you get to know where to find one available on your phone. Occasionally, some promotions are offered for users like free ride or red-packet bikes , which makes this cycling activity even hotter.

　　(共享單車是現(xiàn)在國內(nèi)最流行的短途出行工具尤其是在城市年輕人中。它們可以被放置在任何地點，這很大限度地方便了用戶。你找到一輛單車后，只需要掃一下車上的二維碼就可以解鎖它。到達(dá)目的地后你手動關(guān)鎖行程就結(jié)束了。共享單車每小時收費0.5-1塊錢不等。現(xiàn)在最有名和最廣泛的兩種單車是摩拜單車和小黃車。你需要下載他們的app，交一定數(shù)量的押金就可以上路了。這些車上甚至有GPRS 定位裝置，你可以通過手機知道哪里有車。單車時不時會有些優(yōu)惠活動，像免費騎行或紅包車，這讓騎行越來越火了。)

　　那這就是我們一篇托福的語料了。

　　那我們現(xiàn)在再來按照托?？荚嚜毩⑷蝿?wù)題的2題模式Brainstorm一下shared bike 的advantages 和 disadvantages 分別是什么?

　　首先來說 Advantages：

　　1 convenient (從剛才的語料中可以提取);

　　2 a good exercise for body —cycling;

　　3 moneysaving

　　4 Never have to be afraid of bike missing.

　　5….(等你來填充)

　　Disadvantages:

　　1 hard to maintain，

　　2 dangerous riding

　　3 bad weather ( rain, snow, wind, sunburn)

　　4 time consuming for especially long distance.

　　5 ……(自己試一試)

　　同學(xué)們試著根據(jù)這些提示來分別表達(dá)一下shared bike的優(yōu)缺點吧。

　　近期，國家出臺意見稿鼓勵共享單車實名制。

　　“ Recently, the ministry of transport released a draft guideline to encourage and regulate the development of shared bikes, soliciting public opinions for two weeks. The draft requires real name registration for shared bikes.

　　意見稿還指出，要加強信用管理，建立企業(yè)和用戶信用基礎(chǔ)數(shù)據(jù)庫(establish an enterprise and user credit database), 將企業(yè)和用戶不文明行為和違法違規(guī)行為記入信用記錄(uncivilized behaviors and violations by enterprises and users will be written into their credit record), 建立守信激勵和失信懲戒機制。

　　相關(guān)詞匯

　　deposit management 押金管理

　　client security 用戶安全

　　Parking management 停車管理

　　sharing economy 共享經(jīng)濟

　　car-sharing 共享汽車