托福獨立寫作真題范文：年長的人和同齡人的建議更有價值嗎

　　Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Getting advice from friends who are older than you is more valuable than getting advice from friends in your same age.

　　試題分析：

　　是否新題：否

　　重復情況：北美2009-3-24考題

　　題材：社會類

　　觀點： 同意

　　托福獨立寫作思路：

　　1. 家長會給我們提一些建議，他們教我們如何選擇朋友，發(fā)現(xiàn)我們潛在的能力;

　　2. 老師會給我們提一些建議，幫助我們解決學習上的問題，指導我們進行職業(yè)規(guī)劃;

　　3. 導師會給我們提一些建議，幫助我們培養(yǎng)工作技能，管理人際關系。

　　Getting advice from friends who are older than you is more valuable than getting advice from friends your same age. Do you agree or disagree ?從年長的朋友處得到的建議比從同齡的朋友處得到的建議更加有價值?

　　點睛：

　　題目大意：從年長的人獲得建議要比從同齡人獲得建議更有價值。此題目重復2014年11月8日B卷原題，解題思路和老年人的建議有沒有價值是一樣的。波波建議選擇同意，對advice 進行拆分，拆分成工作和教育兩個角度，分別證明年長人的意見的價值。

　　托福寫作范文參考一:

　　【首段】 背景介紹 + 爭議焦點 + 作家立場

　　A close friend is what every individual longs after. After all, a day without friendship is like a day without sunshine. A true friend should be one from who we can resort to for help or get valuable suggestions when we are in time of adversity. People differ greatly in their views as to whether or not guidance and advice from older friends is superior to the counterparts from peers. As I see it, advice from elderly friends deserves more praises, although suggestions from our peers are never without their merits.

　　【二段】年長的朋友的建議的利好

　　For a start，rich life experience could be seen as a sort of precious wealth, including those bitter or frustrating experiences. Every individual grows up via experiencing failure or dilemma, one might，at times，feel puzzled，thereby，he or she needs advice and guidance from friends.

　　Under such circumstances, older friends could be our best teachers because they have accumulated a pool of life wisdom, thus, their advice could be precious life guidance. A survey is persuasive enough to justify my stand, the survey conducted by Vista, after consulting many people have found that most respondents claimed that compared with communicating with peers, they prefer to get advice from elderly friends, for their suggestions could help to diminish the likelihood of failure and avoid detours

　　【三段】年長的朋友的建議的利好

　　This debate reminds me of my Uncle Paul, who is a successful business leader. My uncle had studied in New Zealand for more than five years, so, he strongly recommended me to study abroad when facing with the option of studying at home or furthering my study in a foreign country. His suggestion was that a young man could become mature, tenacious and confident by personal struggle in an unfamiliar environment.

　　After listening to my uncle’s advice, I studied even harder during the process of self-improvement, I happily found that I can be more attentive and have more self-discipline. More importantly, I had a clear goal to fight for. It was the suggestion form my uncle that helps me to hardened my heart to study overseas. I had deliberately chosen to lead the life I desire, for the life wisdom learning from my uncle could be considered as a shortcut to success.

　　【四段】年輕朋友的建議也有利好

　　Indeed, I have to concede that suggestions from peers might still their merits to some extent. An argument hold by some people is that people of the similar age have a lot in common such as growth environment or educational background, in this sense, their communication could be more convincing.

　　Furthermore, some people might argue that the experiences of past bear little relevance to today’s life. What I want to rebut，however，is that youngster’s understanding about life is far from mature compared with those from older friends, after all, older friends are more far-sighted and wise.

　　【尾段】再次亮明觀點

　　In closing, I re-affirm my conviction that guidance and suggestions from mature friends expert a far more profound and beneficial effect on one’s action.