托福獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作主體段如何展開(kāi)?摸清套路合理仿寫(xiě)高分模板

　　托福獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作是托福寫(xiě)作的第二部分，考察考生對(duì)某個(gè)話題獨(dú)立闡述個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)并給出支持性論據(jù)的英文書(shū)面表達(dá)能力。在這個(gè)部分的一大難點(diǎn)和重點(diǎn)在于主體段的展開(kāi)，如何有效表明自己的觀點(diǎn)，讓讀者信服，是考生備考托福寫(xiě)作時(shí)需要重點(diǎn)把握的。下面我們借助一篇范文的主體段寫(xiě)作示例，剖析一下主體段展開(kāi)的邏輯思路和亮眼模板，再結(jié)合例題看一下如何巧妙借鑒模板進(jìn)行仿寫(xiě)。

　　題目：Students can use their mobile phones to surf on the Internet or listen to the music while doing their homework.

　　立場(chǎng)：不同意

　　理由：做作業(yè)的時(shí)候干別的很難集中精力，必定會(huì)影響效率

　　【段落示例】

　　[1] Firstly, it is impossible for students to concentrate on their homework while doing something else at the same time. [2] This is because homework usually demands a relatively quiet place and full concentration from the student. [3] Conversely, if a student is doing homework and listening to music or surfing online as well, his or her attention will be torn apart, and the efficiency of finishing homework will be inevitably affected. [4] A good case in point is my own experience. [5] When I am working on a mission such as preparing a presentation, I have to devote all my attention to it and cannot afford any slight disturbance. [6] If I randomly refresh my Weibo or Wechat on cell phone, my job would be bound to last for a longer time.

　　[1] 主題句：It is + adj. + for sb. to do A.

　　[2] 正面說(shuō)理：This is because….

　　[3] 反面說(shuō)理：Conversely….

　　[4] 引出例子：A good case in point is X’s experience.

　　[5-6] 闡述例子： Content of the example

　　【模板總結(jié)】

　　It is important or beneficial for sb. to do A in order to X. This is because A 對(duì)于 X 的重要性或者好處。Conversely, 如果不做 A 對(duì)于 X 的壞處。A good case in point is Eg1’s experience. 2-3 句闡述例子。The story of Eg1 perfectly illustrates the importance of A.

　　這里把 impossible 變成了 important or beneficial 因?yàn)榇蟛糠诸}目我們都是支持的。既然支持，原因自然是 A 很好或者 A 很重要，自然這兩個(gè)詞就變得非常通用。最后又加了一個(gè)對(duì)于例子的總結(jié)，我們需要做的就是寫(xiě)清楚 A 對(duì)于 X 的好處是啥，不做 A 的壞處是啥，以及補(bǔ)充例子的具體內(nèi)容。當(dāng)然了，這只是一個(gè)非常理想的情況，如果由于某些原因不能保證正反說(shuō)理和例子同時(shí)存在，可以酌情去掉。比如沒(méi)有例子可以只有正反說(shuō)理，只不過(guò)各說(shuō) 2-3 句即可。類(lèi)似的，如果沒(méi)有反面說(shuō)理，可以例子或者正面的說(shuō)理多說(shuō)一句。極端情況下，主題句和說(shuō)理都不會(huì)寫(xiě)，那直接上例子唄。

　　【模板應(yīng)用示例】

　　Agree or disagree, it is better for children to choose the jobs of their parents.

　　It is important for us to choose a job that suits our interests in order to distinguish ourselves in a particular field. This is because not only could we have much higher work efficiency by devoting ourselves to a job that interests us，but also we are more likely to come up with innovative ideas. Conversely, following in the footsteps of our parents without thinking of what fascinates us is likely to lead us to nothing but mediocre life.A good case in point is Kobe, a shooting guard who plays for the Los Angeles Lakers of the National Basketball Association. He is one of the most influential basketball players in the history of NBA, not solely for his success in leading the Lakers to three consecutive NBA championships, but for his courage to choose a career that he is obsessed with. The story of Kobe perfectly illustrates the importance of personal interest in one’s career development.

　　【重點(diǎn)句式】

　　Not only could we …, but also we are more likely to ….

　　…., not solely for A, but for B.

　　【重點(diǎn)表達(dá)】

　　devote A to B

　　suit one’s interest | interest sb | fascinate sb | be obsessed with

　　come up with

　　without thinking of

　　following in the footstep of sb

　　【模板替換】

　　主題句

　　No one would deny the fact that the importance of A to X should never be overlooked.

　　The fact that A is of vital importance to X is hardly a surprise.

　　There is no denying that A is conducive to X or A is closely bound up with X.

　　On no account should we underestimate the importance of A to X.

　　By no means are we supposed to close our eyes to the importance of A to X.

　　It is A that plays an essential part in X.

　　What we have to admit is that A is a major contributor to X.

　　正面說(shuō)理

　　因

　　One of the most obvious reasons of this point is that ….

　　What may explain this point is that ….

　　The reason is that ….

　　Of the various reasons attempting to account for this point, the most likely one is that ….

　　It is generally believed that X results from A.

　　果

　　That is the reason why ….

　　…., as a result of which ….

　　…., which may explain why ….

　　反面說(shuō)理

　　On the contrary | In contrast | Conversely | On the other hand

　　引出例子

　　To illustrate, we may refer to the example of A.

　　A is a good demonstration of this point.

　　For relevant examples, we just need to turn to A.

　　There is no better illustration of this point than the example of A.

　　There are myriads of examples in our lives that can be used here to substantiate this point, one of which is XXX.

　　If anyone needs convincing that…, here is the proof.

　　If anyone looks for further evidence that …, they should look at ….

　　Those seeking more conviction that … can now turn to ….

　　Examples of this point abounds in our lives, one of which is ….

　　… can be cited here as an example of this point.

　　總結(jié)例子

　　The story of Eg. perfectly illustrates the importance of A to X.

　　It can be seen from the story of Eg. that A is an indispensable ingredient of X.

　　Without A, Eg. could have never done X.

　　Needless to say, Eg’s story indicates that X is largely a result of A.

　　Had Eg. not done A, Eg. would have never done X.

　　看完了以上的托福獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作主體段展開(kāi)方式剖析與模板具體應(yīng)用示例，童鞋們有沒(méi)有覺(jué)得托福獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作備考輕松一些呢?其實(shí)，任何模板也好范文也罷都不可能做到“萬(wàn)能”，但我們可以對(duì)優(yōu)秀作文和模板進(jìn)行合理的改寫(xiě)練習(xí)，通過(guò)合理借鑒充分提升我們的托福寫(xiě)作水平，以不變應(yīng)萬(wàn)變地助力我們的托福寫(xiě)作提分之路。