托福寫作怎樣寫出好例子

　　例子可以使我們想要表達(dá)的觀點(diǎn)或者要闡述的概念更加生動(dòng)形象，以使得觀點(diǎn)更加地具有說服力。而且針對托福寫作來講，考官比較青睞例證比較好的文章。一般來講，在托福的獨(dú)立寫作當(dāng)中，我們常用的例子包括兩種，一種例子是去描述特別具體的某個(gè)人或者某一件事情，這種例子一般比較適合與我們的生活，工作和學(xué)習(xí)緊密相關(guān)的話題。比如“Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Keeping old friends is more important than making new friends.”;第二種例子就是假設(shè)一個(gè)一般化的例子，通過假設(shè)一個(gè)場景來說明問題，而這種例子的寫法一般比較適合話題比較大的一些話題，比如“Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Land needs to be used to meet human need rather than to protect endangered animals.”今天我們就來展示怎樣把這兩種例子寫好。

　　01具體的例子

　　Topic: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The students in university should not do any part-time jobs.

　　Position: Disagree

　　Reason: Doing part-time jobs can intensify our social ability.

　　Exemplification: Take myself for example. When I was a fresh man，I found it really hard to get along with people around me. Then I was advised to take a job as a waiter in the restaurant during which I had chances to communicate with different customers, making them satisfied with my “smile” service. After a year, I myself can realize that I have become more outgoing and understanding.

　　寫一個(gè)很具體例子的時(shí)候同學(xué)們要注意幾個(gè)問題：

　　1、不要寫得特別長，寫太多就變成了記敘文，而我們的獨(dú)立寫作是議論文體;

　　2、這種例子一定要和說理分析性的內(nèi)容結(jié)合在一起才能夠支撐起來一個(gè)主體段。

　　02假設(shè)性的例子

　　假設(shè)性的例子有兩點(diǎn)好處。其一就是別人不會懷疑我們寫的這個(gè)例子的真實(shí)性，二就是假設(shè)性的例子其實(shí)是analytic example，這種伴隨著分析的例子其實(shí)要更符合托福獨(dú)立寫作的風(fēng)格，更能夠體現(xiàn)一個(gè)學(xué)生的分析能力與水平，畢竟議論文的特點(diǎn)就是分析和證明。

　　Topic：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Land needs to be used to meet human need rather than to protect endangered animals.

　　Position：Protect endangered animals

　　Reason: Another important reason to protect endangered animals is that the delicate ecological balance of an area might be irreparably harmed by their extinction.

　　Exemplification: For example, if humans chop down forests and use the land to grow corn, they might simultaneously destroy the habitats of a kind of bird that eats locusts. The next year because the locust population can grow unchecked, locusts might destroy the entire nearby corn crop. Not only do the birds lose their homes, but humans are also harmed. The ecological balance of many natural habitats is still not well understood and humans interfere in it at their peril.

　　通過這一段，大家可以看到假設(shè)性的例子的威力。整段文章不長，例子也不多，但是卻非常有效地證明了段首的觀點(diǎn)即保護(hù)生態(tài)平衡的重要性。所以，文章不一定要寫很多，但是一定要寫好，永遠(yuǎn)不要忘了，獨(dú)立寫作的靈魂和核心就是去證明一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)的合理性和說服力，所以你用的手段很重要。