托福寫作高級(jí)句型解析

　　原文材料：

　　"The new rules should thus expose polluters to a scissor-style pressure:from above,through the central-planning system,and from below,from the media and organisations such as Mr Ma's."

　　推薦句型：

　　xxx be exposed to a scissor-style pressure: from above, through…, and from below, from….

　　推薦理由：

　　壓力毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)是一個(gè)寫作和口語(yǔ)考試中非常常用的一個(gè)萬(wàn)能理由，因?yàn)樗梢愿芏鄸|西相關(guān)，比如壓力的來(lái)源(生活壓力，學(xué)習(xí)壓力，工作壓力)，壓力的影響(身體差，心情不爽)，減壓的方式和措施等等，上面的句型就可以用來(lái)描寫某一個(gè)主體，比如工作的人或者學(xué)生，面臨著雙重壓力，工作的人可能來(lái)自照顧老人撫養(yǎng)孩子;學(xué)生可能來(lái)自父母老師以及同伴。

　　原創(chuàng)例句：

　　1. A majority of the youths today are exposed to a scissor-style pressure: from above, through looking after the ever growing aging population, and from below, from the soaring costs of raising children.

　　2. A multitude of teenagers at present are exposed to a scissor-style pressure: from above, through their parents with ever-higher expectations, and from below, from their peers most of whom try their best to outdo each other.

　　學(xué)以致用：

　　1. People care more about public recognition than about money.

　　根據(jù)上面的例句，這個(gè)題目我們可以選擇不同意，那些苦逼的剛上班沒(méi)幾年的年輕人，怎么可能更在乎名而不是錢呢?他們壓力多大啊，當(dāng)然需要錢了啊;

　　2. Younger school children should be required to study music and art in addition to language, science, and mathematics.

　　同樣，這個(gè)題目我們也可以選擇不同意的立場(chǎng)，孩子們本來(lái)就壓力特別大，父母期望高，同伴都一個(gè)比一個(gè)牛逼，學(xué)校里面的課程和輔導(dǎo)課都上不完呢，怎么可能有時(shí)間搞別的呢。這不是坑爹嗎?

　　句型2

　　原文材料：

　　While, arguably, this “finding” is as trivial as an umbrella that turns blue when it’s going to rain, there is nothing trivial about collecting personal data, as innocuous as that data may seem.

　　推薦句型(變體)：

　　While...seems/sounds as adj. as can be, there is nothing more adj. than...

　　推薦理由：

　　我們?cè)讵?dú)立寫作中經(jīng)常用到對(duì)比的寫法。這個(gè)句型可用在具有對(duì)比意味的語(yǔ)境中，前半句當(dāng)作讓步，“盡管對(duì)比中的一個(gè)因素看起來(lái)已經(jīng)很…”, 后半句轉(zhuǎn)折說(shuō)“但是另一個(gè)因素更…”.

　　原創(chuàng)例句：

　　1. While environmental protection seems as pressing as can be, there is nothing more pressing than feeding the growing population in disadvantaged countries where the original eco-system is well preserved.

　　2. While a secure job seems as tempting as can be, there is no job more tempting than a risky and well-paid one for the new generation who are mostly avid challenge hunters.

　　3. While playing sports with a couple of friends sounds as relaxing as can be, there is nothing more relaxing than a good book or an old movie for those manual laborers who are wearied out with strenuous physical work every day.

　　學(xué)以致用：

　　1. Feeding the world’s growing population is more important than protecting environment.

　　這道題中如果我們持同意的意見(jiàn)，就可以用到第一個(gè)例句。盡管到處都在宣揚(yáng)保護(hù)環(huán)境的重要，但是并非世界各地的環(huán)境都破壞了啊，比如美麗的非洲大草原原始生態(tài)環(huán)境保持完好，但是一些邊緣小國(guó)民不聊生，人民瘦的皮包骨，你說(shuō)feed population重要還是保護(hù)環(huán)境重要呢?

　　2. It is better to take a secure job with a low pay than to take a risky one with a high salary.

　　根據(jù)第二個(gè)例句，我們這道題可以不同意。雖然鐵飯碗聽(tīng)起來(lái)挺誘人的，但新一代的年輕人個(gè)個(gè)都很傲嬌，熱衷追尋挑戰(zhàn)，高薪高風(fēng)險(xiǎn)的工作相比之下更合他們的口味。

　　3. To read a book or to watch a movie is a better way to relax than to do some physical exercises.

　　第三個(gè)例句回答的就是這道題，確實(shí)約三五好友做做運(yùn)動(dòng)聽(tīng)起來(lái)不賴，但是對(duì)于那些每天做繁重體力勞動(dòng)的工人來(lái)說(shuō)，額外的運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)加重他們的身體負(fù)擔(dān)，還是一本好書或者一部老電影更能幫他們放松。

　　句型3

　　原文材料：

　　It takes very little imagination to foresee how the kitchen mood wall could lead to advertisements for antidepressants that follow you around the Web...It takes even less imagination to foresee how information about your comings and goings obtained from the Google Latitude Doorbell could be used in a court of law.

　　推薦句型：

　　It takes very little imagination to ….It takes even less imagination to ...

　　推薦理由：

　　這個(gè)句型看起來(lái)很簡(jiǎn)單，但我們一般不會(huì)想到先用little表示極少，再用less表示比little還少。兩個(gè)句子排列工整，可以用在說(shuō)理部分，用來(lái)描述一個(gè)不言自明、顯而易見(jiàn)的情況

　　原創(chuàng)例句：

　　1. It takes very little imagination to foresee how fast competition in the adulthood would turn vicious; it takes even less imagination to foresee in what way vicious competition would influence friendships.

　　2. It takes little imagination to visualize what people would be like if they do not have access to education. It takes even less imagination to visualize what a country would be like if its people are, through no fault of their own, ignorant.

　　3. It takes little imagination to foresee that people’s awareness will soon be enhanced. It takes even less imagination to foresee that governments of different countries will take joint efforts and sponsor more scientific researches against the exacerbating environment.

　　學(xué)以致用：

　　1. Competition between friends always has negative influence on their friendship.

　　這道題簡(jiǎn)直不能同意更多，成年朋友之間一有競(jìng)爭(zhēng)就容易友盡。用例句的話說(shuō)就是，不難想象成年人之間的競(jìng)爭(zhēng)很快就會(huì)升級(jí)成撕逼大戰(zhàn)，更不難猜競(jìng)爭(zhēng)變味后的朋友還能不能好好玩耍。

　　2. Improving schools is the most important factor for the successful development of a country.

　　古話說(shuō)得好，教育是國(guó)之根本，沒(méi)文化真可怕。一個(gè)人沒(méi)受過(guò)教育會(huì)是啥樣，一個(gè)國(guó)家的人都沒(méi)文化這個(gè)國(guó)家又會(huì)是啥樣，敢想嗎?所以這道題就同意唄，改善學(xué)校是國(guó)家成功發(fā)展的最重要因素。

　　3. The most important problems that affect our society can be solved within our lifetime.

　　現(xiàn)在人類最煩心的事是什么?看看帝都人民發(fā)明的APEC blue就知道了，環(huán)境啊。那環(huán)境問(wèn)題能不能在我們有生之年解決呢?當(dāng)然了，都已經(jīng)水深火熱成這樣了，人民的環(huán)保意識(shí)肯定會(huì)提高啊，過(guò)年過(guò)節(jié)放鞭炮的都少了;基層人民都行動(dòng)了，各國(guó)政府還好意思圍觀么，當(dāng)然得行動(dòng)起來(lái)了。當(dāng)年的倫敦霧霾一世紀(jì)就緩過(guò)來(lái)了，我們現(xiàn)在科技這么發(fā)達(dá)，心情這么迫切，很有可能環(huán)境問(wèn)題幾十年就解決了。所以這道題答yes就行了。

　　句型4

　　原文材料：

　　Meanwhile, cars themselves are becoming computers on wheels, with operating system updates coming wirelessly over the air.

　　推薦句型：

　　with+n./pron.+doing

　　推薦理由：

　　兩個(gè)主語(yǔ)發(fā)出兩種動(dòng)作，這兩種動(dòng)作又幾乎同時(shí)發(fā)生，你會(huì)怎么寫?打賭80%的同學(xué)都是The economy is developing fast, but the environment is deteriorating. 為了增強(qiáng)句式變化，我們可以使用一個(gè)with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，把其中一個(gè)主語(yǔ)和動(dòng)作塞進(jìn)復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)里。

　　原創(chuàng)例句：

　　1. Urban residents find it more difficult to raise children than five decades ago, with living cost and tuition hitting all time high.

　　2. Fresh grads in first-tier cities nowadays find themselves more pressured than ever before, with competition in the job market growing increasingly stiff.

　　3. This is due to the fact that students can retrieve information and obtain knowledge from various sources other than teachers, with new media advancing continuously these years.

　　學(xué)以致用：

　　1. It is easier for parents to raise children than 50 years ago.

　　過(guò)去人們一直抱怨計(jì)劃生育政策，但是開(kāi)放二胎之后卻沒(méi)多少人生。生孩子就那么分分鐘的事兒，為啥沒(méi)人生呢?不好養(yǎng)唄。奶粉貴不貴，上學(xué)貴不貴，所以就像第一個(gè)例句說(shuō)的，隨著生活和教育成本再創(chuàng)新高，城市居民發(fā)現(xiàn)撫養(yǎng)孩子比五十年前難多了。

　　2. The rules the whole society expects young people to follow are too strict.

　　近來(lái)找過(guò)工作的年輕人肯定都感受到了這個(gè)社會(huì)森森的惡意，隨便一家很水的公司招聘都要3、5年的工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)，這么苛刻的規(guī)則還讓不讓我們新畢業(yè)的菜鳥(niǎo)玩兒了?所以這一題我們舉雙手雙腳贊成，如例句二所說(shuō)，工作市場(chǎng)競(jìng)爭(zhēng)的激烈指數(shù)一路飆升，讓一線城市的小鮮肉們感受到了史無(wú)前例的壓力。

　　3. Teachers today are less appreciated and valued than in the past.

　　身為老師我只能為這題含淚點(diǎn)贊，隨著新媒體的發(fā)展，學(xué)生們翅膀硬了，有度娘有谷歌，哪里不會(huì)點(diǎn)哪里，誰(shuí)還在乎老師呢。

　　句型5

　　原文材料：

　　Recent revelations from the journalist Glenn Greenwald put the number of Americans under government surveillance at a colossal 1.2 million people.

　　推薦句型：

　　Recent ... from…put the number of…at ...

　　推薦理由：

　　數(shù)據(jù)論證憑借自身的通(wu)用(lai)深受男女老少歡迎，可以說(shuō)是居家旅行托福雅思之必備神器。這個(gè)句式用在數(shù)據(jù)論證中，介紹某一來(lái)源中的一個(gè)具體數(shù)字再裝逼不過(guò)了。

　　原創(chuàng)例句：

　　1. A recent survey jointly conducted by Tencent.com and National Analysis has put the number of users of cab-hailing apps at a colossal 150 million, with only 1.8% aged over 50.

　　2. A recent report issued by the government has put the number of Chinese cities blanketed by smog at an astonishing 61.

　　3. A recent poll conducted by Shanghai University has put the number of respondents who want to live in a cheap place at a whopping 350, 000, approximately 80% of whom are under the age of 30.

　　學(xué)以致用：

　　1. Technologies designed to make our lives easier actually make it more complicated.

　　科技并不是公平的，對(duì)什么都能迅速上手的年輕人來(lái)說(shuō)，科技著實(shí)使生活變得簡(jiǎn)單。但是對(duì)于腦筋不夠靈活視力也逐年下降的老年人來(lái)說(shuō)，科技反而會(huì)使他們的生活變復(fù)雜。比如騰訊和國(guó)家分析局做的一個(gè)調(diào)查顯示打車軟件的用戶已經(jīng)高達(dá)1.5億，但這其中只有1.8%的用戶年紀(jì)超過(guò)50歲(此調(diào)查純屬虛構(gòu)如有雷同純屬巧合)。大爺大媽們不會(huì)用軟件，路上的車都被年輕人用打車軟件預(yù)定了，你說(shuō)科技是不是使老年人的生活更復(fù)雜了?

　　2. Environmental problems are too complex, and individuals cannot handle them.

　　環(huán)境問(wèn)題一直是近年來(lái)各種媒體上的buzzword，那為了渲染環(huán)境問(wèn)題嚴(yán)重，我們可以一句話證明環(huán)境沒(méi)救了。比如第二個(gè)例句說(shuō)，近來(lái)一個(gè)中國(guó)政府報(bào)告稱被霧霾籠罩的中國(guó)城市數(shù)目已經(jīng)達(dá)到駭人的61個(gè)。后面再解釋說(shuō)pm2.5多高，污染程度之深, 來(lái)證明個(gè)人行為是無(wú)法解決這樣的問(wèn)題的。Nailed it～

　　3. Which place do you prefer to live in? a. a place that is not expensive. b. a place that is close to relatives c. a place with a lot of shops and restaurants around

　　這道三選一問(wèn)題非常接地氣，問(wèn)人們想住什么樣的地方。那么上海大學(xué)的民調(diào)又可以出場(chǎng)了，多達(dá)350，000位受訪者表示愿意住在便宜的地方，其中百分之八十左右是30歲以下的窮屌絲，那這道題的答案顯然就是年輕人住便宜點(diǎn)，哪怕上下班山水迢迢。