托福作文題目如何開展寫作

　　Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To achieve successful development of a country，a government should spend more money on young children's education rather than on universities。

　　同意/不同意：為了一個國家的發(fā)展，政府應(yīng)當(dāng)花更多的錢在兒童教育上，而不是大學(xué)教育上。

　　對于以上的話題，我們應(yīng)該采取的可以用以下三步走的方式進(jìn)行：

　　第一步：找取題目中的關(guān)鍵詞或者關(guān)鍵詞總結(jié)為一個綜合事件，突出其關(guān)注度以及其作用;

　　比如題干里的關(guān)鍵詞：money spent on young children’s education or universities; 又或者關(guān)鍵詞被總結(jié)上升到了一個比較大的維度：the problem of education investment

　　因此我們可以開頭以上述方法寫出：

　　As is reported by mass media, the increasing number of individuals has attaches much importance to the problem of educational investment given by government which plays an irreplaceable role in accomplishing accelerated development of a country.

　　the problem of educational investment given by government就是題目提取出的關(guān)鍵詞總結(jié)事件，accomplishing accelerated development of a country就是這個事件的影響，

　　第二步：確立自己的觀點(diǎn)，接下來描述與自己對立觀點(diǎn)下的一種具體現(xiàn)象和原因。也就達(dá)到了我們在討論性的層面，但是這個方法更加具體詳細(xì)。如下：

　　influenced by pressure of difficulties in employment, some aggressive students strongly require more financial support to cross-culture-communication programs. (反方觀點(diǎn)的現(xiàn)象)Such an emotional appeal is in the existence for the sake of accumulation of oversea experience as well as preparation for competitive challenges.(現(xiàn)象的原因)(一些激進(jìn)的大學(xué)生強(qiáng)烈要求在跨文化交流項目上給予更多的經(jīng)濟(jì)支持，這樣的一種情感訴求的存在其實還是為了海外經(jīng)歷的積累和對具有競爭性的挑戰(zhàn)做準(zhǔn)備。)

　　第三步：善于運(yùn)用轉(zhuǎn)折邏輯詞however/while/whereas 突出自己的觀點(diǎn)，運(yùn)用總結(jié)性正向形容詞側(cè)面突出個人觀點(diǎn)，如下：

　　However, it is sensible for a government to focus on investment in children’s education due to more benefits in the long term.

　　那么綜合在一起，就有了以下的高分開頭段：

　　As is reported by mass media, the increasing number of individuals has attaches much importance to the problem of educational investment supported by government which plays an irreplaceable role in accomplishing accelerated development of a country. influenced by pressure of difficulties in employment, some aggressive students strongly require more financial support to cross-culture-communication programs. Such an emotional appeal is in the existence for the sake of accumulation of oversea experience as well as preparation for competitive challenges. However, it is sensible for a government to focus on investment in children’s education due to more benefits in the long term.