托福寫作高分滿分范文點(diǎn)評和思路解析：加入團(tuán)體組織的重要性

　　Why are groups or organizations important to people?

　　Groups or organizations are an important part of some people's lives. Why are groups or organizations important to people? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.

　　寫作思路展開結(jié)構(gòu)分析

　　這道題目套理論的是人的歸屬感，這其實(shí)有點(diǎn)偏向于社會學(xué)和心理學(xué)的范疇了。當(dāng)然大家展開觀點(diǎn)不用寫得很深入專業(yè)，找一些淺顯的理由就可以了。小編能想到的幾個理由分別是：排除寂寞;增加歸屬感(togetherness);獲得更多的信息;資源共享等等，大家可以參考一下。

　　本話題高分范文賞析

　　It was said that human beings are social animals. Some might argue human beings should be not called animals, but it's true that human beings are social. Therefore, it's of no surprise that groups or organizations are almost an indispensable part of most people's lives. Most people are afraid of being alone, and for them, being with others is one of the most natural needs. Being a member of a group is comfortable. If an individual has gone so far as to being considered isolated, rumors arise.

　　Others might ponder: what is the matter with that solitary individual? No one would like to be wondered that way.

　　Being a member of a group is also interesting. Every one has his/her own special means to pursue happiness, for example, he/she might be keen on music concerts, or be fond of stamps collecting. By joining a special interest group on his/her pet topic, he/she can easily find many people whose interests are similar to his/her, and can share his/her pleasure with those who can really appreciate it in a proper way.

　　Many people find group or organizations are essential because they know a simple and never-changed fact that every single individual on this Earth has only limited resources. Groups or organizations are always the best choice for an individual to emancipate himself/herself from limitation. By joining a group, an individual is able to share his/her limited resource with others, and share others' resources in turn, therefore is virtually able to reach a much larger amount of resources. The most popular resource-sharing activities exist in the Internet. There are numerous BBS on almost every particular topic on various websites, which always makes copious valuable materials readily reachable. No matter what a person is interested in, for example, music, movie, books, or whatever, he/she will find a right group to join on the internet.

　　In fact, any individual in a sense exists in a certain group: either he/she is a member of some groups, or he/she is a leader of a group. Either way, the group is critical to him/her. People cannot achieve greatness solely by themselves, regardless of their status in the group; they need others, for help, for support, and many other things, since nobody is entirely independent and omnipotent.