托福寫(xiě)作高分滿(mǎn)分范文點(diǎn)評(píng)和思路解析：對(duì)國(guó)家重要的植物

　　A plant that Is important in your country.

　　Plants can provide food, shelter, clothing, or medicine. What is one kind of plant that is important to you or the people in your country? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.

　　寫(xiě)作思路展開(kāi)結(jié)構(gòu)分析

　　這道題目可能會(huì)讓不少同學(xué)覺(jué)得難寫(xiě)，因?yàn)榇蠹覍?duì)植物的關(guān)注一般都是比較少的。所以小編的建議是先想一下植物的各種好處，從當(dāng)中挑出一種比較具有代表性的植物再結(jié)合國(guó)情來(lái)寫(xiě)。比如可以寫(xiě)竹子，然后聯(lián)系到熊貓?；蛘邔?xiě)水稻，雜交水稻喂飽了全中國(guó)人等等，當(dāng)然可能會(huì)涉及到一些專(zhuān)業(yè)術(shù)語(yǔ)，所以也需要注意。

　　本話題高分范文賞析

　　China's culture has always had an intimate relationship with nature. This can be seen in many aspects of Chinese culture, from herbal medicines to intricate Chinese gardens. I believe that the most important plant in my culture is bamboo. Bamboo can be a source of nutrition, it can be used to build many things, from baskets to houses, and it has a large influence on history and arts in China.

　　First and foremost, bamboo is a popular food in our country. Many people will add bamboo to their meals for its delicious flavor and nutritional value. Many animals also enjoy bamboo, the most famous being the Giant Panda. This bear is nearing extinction, and if the natural sources of bamboo were to disappear, the Panda would surely disappear from the world. In addition to being a source of food, bamboo has healing qualities as well. It has been used in traditional Chinese medicine to relieve asthma, coughs, and gall bladder disorders.

　　Bamboo is a very versatile material that can be used to make numerous different items. It has been used in China for thousands of years to make baskets for carrying items, and for constructing buildings. Bamboo grows very, very quickly, and therefore, there is always a steady supply available for our consumption. It has also been used to make fans, furniture, and clothing. Finally, bamboo is very important in the literary and artistic arenas in China, and has been since the first writings were recorded. Bamboo has been used in many Chinese arts: it has been used as a metaphor in literature; it has been used in the making of instruments and artistic implements, such as the bamboo flute or Chinese brushes.

　　It is a prevalent theme in both visual and literary arts. In conclusion I posit that bamboo plays a significant role in the life and culture of Chinese people. It provides food and shelter, and is also a prominent symbol in the artistic world. The Chinese believe that bamboo brings good luck, which proves their admiration and fondness of this particular plant.