托福寫作高分滿分范文點(diǎn)評(píng)和思路解析：學(xué)生的課程專業(yè)選擇

　　Should students be required to take classes in many subjects or to specialize in one subject?

　　Some universities require students to take classes in many subjects. Other universities require students to specialize in one subject. Which is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

　　寫作思路展開結(jié)構(gòu)分析

　　很難說哪一個(gè)比另外一個(gè)更好。It's hard to say one is better than the other. 學(xué)習(xí)范圍過于廣泛(extensive)可能會(huì)導(dǎo)致深度不夠(superficial interpretation) 學(xué)習(xí)范圍過于狹窄(limited)可能會(huì)導(dǎo)致無知(educated ignorance) 所以，學(xué)習(xí)應(yīng)該既保證廣度，也要保證深度。事實(shí)上，學(xué)科之間總是存在著某種這樣那樣的聯(lián)系。比如物理學(xué)和哲學(xué)就兩個(gè)一定程度上相輔相成(be inseparably interconnected)。折衷的方法是，學(xué)校開設(shè)很多的選修課。要求學(xué)生在學(xué)好本專業(yè)課程的同時(shí)，盡量多地了解其他領(lǐng)域。

　　本話題高分范文賞析

　　Universities that require their students to take classes in many subjects offer a very different educational experience from the universities that encourage specialization. As higher education becomes a more accessible commodity students will be able to choose between these two different forms of instruction. The answer to the question of which system is better depends on the student's interests and the goals of their studies.

　　Students who complete a degree at a university which requires them to take classes in many different subjects will receive a well rounded education. Here they will be able to develop their knowledge in different areas, and they will also have the opportunity to find out what their interests really are as they will be exposed to a variety of fields of study. Therefore, this kind of university is ideal for students who have many interests or don't know what their interests are. Also, students who have an interest in education and consider the possibility of graduate school will be able to gain a broader knowledge base before specializing later on in their academic careers. They will be able to pursue education for education's sake and not just to learn a trade. When they try to find work after graduation their versatility will allow them to apply for a wide range of jobs.

　　On the other hand, students who specialize will have a great advantage over students who don't when it comes to finding a job in their specific field of study. Naturally, companies will be most interested in job applicants who have superior knowledge and can thus make the greatest contributions. At the same time, the specialization system allows students to focus on their interests and the subjects relevant to them. Students majoring in physics or chemistry would feel very out of place in a course on ancient poetry or Western literature. They might consider it a waste of their time and energy. This might then have a negative effect on their educational progress in general.