托福寫作高分滿分范文點(diǎn)評(píng)和思路解析：電腦改變?nèi)祟惿?/h1>

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2019年10月05日

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　　Computers and human life

　　Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

　　寫作思路展開結(jié)構(gòu)分析

　　觀點(diǎn)是：計(jì)算機(jī)帶來了方便的同時(shí)也造成了很多的麻煩。盡管如此，計(jì)算機(jī)的發(fā)明仍然是偉大的進(jìn)步。計(jì)算機(jī)帶來的方便，數(shù)不勝數(shù)(beyond count; countless; too numerous to count) 計(jì)算機(jī)帶來的麻煩，比如：千年蟲(Y2K)問題;電子游戲的負(fù)面作用;網(wǎng)絡(luò)即時(shí)聊天系統(tǒng)(instant message programs such as ICQ, MSN messenger, Yahoo paper etc.)

　　本話題高分范文賞析

　　For every individual who praises the advent of the computer age there seems to be a computer phobic person. Truly, many people are having a difficult time warning up to this machine and its ubiquity. The computer appears to have made life more complex because it can be difficult to understand and it has quickened our pace of life and thus caused stress, but once people learn how to use it they will be able to appreciate the conveniences it has to offer.

　　Many people, especially older generations, are not familiar with computers and therefore uncomfortable with them. They find the machine's workings too complex and difficult to understand. Even the terminology seems like a completely different language, because twenty years ago nobody knew what words like software, hardware, or network connection meant. When people heard the word mouse they thought of a rodent. This has changed today, and few teenagers would make the same mistake as their grandparents. It is also true that computers have quickened the pace of life by allowing us to communicate and do business more efficiently, and this can certainly result in stress. After all, time saved is usually spent on accomplishing more tasks, and thus personal and professional schedules have become more crowded. The stress factor increases yet again when the technology on which we rely breaks down. Few people understand their computers well enough to fix them, and as entire companies depend on this technology to handle all of their business needs, a single broken computer can wreck a lot of havoc. Nevertheless, computers and the Internet have become an integral part of everyday life. Computers are here to stay, because they facilitate many of our everyday processes and we have already grown dependent on them. Today computer owners use their machines not only to communicate and do business but also for entertainment. As people learn more about computers they will become more comfortable with them, and technological progress will fix many of the small annoyances that cause stress to their owners.