托福寫作高分滿分范文點(diǎn)評(píng)和思路解析：所在城市的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)

　　The advantages and disadvantages of my city.

　　A person you know is planning to move to your town or city. What do you think this person would like and dislike about living in your town or city? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.

　　寫作思路展開結(jié)構(gòu)分析

　　這是一道關(guān)系到大家實(shí)際情況的題目，但同時(shí)這是一個(gè)討論假設(shè)問題的題目。因此小編建議大家可以盡量展開想象。注意：不要只說my city，要指出你所在城市的名字， 比如：Beijing, Shanghai等等。一般來說，人們會(huì)喜歡城市的原因有：女人喜歡商場(chǎng);男人可能喜歡書店;大的公園、動(dòng)物園;名勝古跡;文化氛圍。而人們會(huì)討厭的原因有：交通堵塞;空氣不新鮮;大城市的排外主義(exclusivism)、不友善(unfriendly)等等。

　　本話題高分范文賞析

　　If my friend Joey wants to move to Beijing, I think even though she might find something she dislikes, she will ultimately like this greatest city in our country. The weather might be one thing that she dislikes. The weather in Beijing is characterized by dry climate and it is much windy and dusty than that of Guangzhou city. Joey is very sensitive about her skin, so she will definitely hate dusty winds in Beijing. Moreover, Beijing's winter is far too much colder than that of Guangzhou, it might take Joey, as many other people came from the South, a very long time to get accustomed to. Nevertheless, she might well enjoy winter in the North, since she has never seen snowflakes in reality before. I remembered the shining of yearning and eager in her eyes when I once told her what the winter in the North looks like.

　　She might be always irritated by heavy traffic in Beijing, though taxis in Beijing cost much less than in Guangzhou. When I was in Guangzhou, seldom was I trapped by traffic jams. It must be ridiculous for her to have spent more than two hours and still didn't arrive at the destination which is merely 10 kilometers away. And the most ludicrous thing is, even if you possess a private car, it is more likely to be useless, for parking lots are always crowded, which means more time is to be wasted. Good news for her is that the bus system and that of subway in Beijing are well developed and more convenient, and she won't have to bear that odor of bromhidrosis owing to burning weather as she once experienced in buses of Guangzhou. What she will definitely love is the cultural ethos of the city. Beijing has a history probably longer than any other big city in China. To visit all historical landscapes in Beijing, she will need at least three years, no kidding!

　　Beijing has the most famous and excellent universities, the largest libraries, the richest museums, yet most important of all, her best friend! Amazingly, in this aged city, people are sometimes more international. Joey is especially fond of art, and Beijing is the right place for her, in which concerts of international singers or other musicians are much frequent, and she will even be able to attend Cui Jian's casual private concert in a coffee shop on a rainy autumn weekend.

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