托福寫(xiě)作提升印象分要先解決用詞重復(fù)語(yǔ)句啰嗦問(wèn)題

　　托福寫(xiě)作中考生不僅需要根據(jù)題目要求寫(xiě)出內(nèi)容切題的文章，也不可忽視帶給讀者也就是考官的閱讀體驗(yàn)。有時(shí)候大家寫(xiě)出的文章雖然內(nèi)容很好，但表述上讓考官看起來(lái)很不舒服，造成一些錯(cuò)誤理解或是閱讀不暢的問(wèn)題，也會(huì)影響作文評(píng)分。下面小編就來(lái)為大家具體介紹提升方法。

　　托福作文詞匯應(yīng)選擇使用不空洞的詞

　　1.一些空洞的單詞或詞組根本不能為句子帶來(lái)任何相關(guān)的或重要的信息，完全可以被刪掉。比如下面的句子：

　　When all things are considered，young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents，in my opinion.

　　這句話當(dāng)中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都顯得多余。完全可以去掉。改為：

　　Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.

　　2.有些空洞和繁瑣的表達(dá)方式可以進(jìn)行替換，例如：

　　Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents， they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.

　　“due to the fact that”就是一個(gè)很典型的繁瑣的表達(dá)方式的例子，可以替換，簡(jiǎn)化為下面的表達(dá)方式：

　　Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents， they did not have the options that young people have now.

　　托福寫(xiě)作中應(yīng)盡量減少重復(fù)啰嗦

　　1.盡量避免重復(fù)使用同樣的詞匯?；蛘哂械臅r(shí)候雖然詞匯沒(méi)有重復(fù)，但意思卻有重復(fù)。這時(shí)候可以做一些簡(jiǎn)化的工作。例如下面這個(gè)例子：

　　The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size.

　　large 對(duì)一個(gè)farm來(lái)說(shuō)就是size方面的large，所以in size可以去掉，改為：

　　The farm my grandfather grew up on was large.

　　更簡(jiǎn)潔的表達(dá)方式為：

　　My grandfather grew up on a large farm.

　　2.有時(shí)一個(gè)詞組可以用一個(gè)更簡(jiǎn)單的單詞來(lái)替換，例如：

　　My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents’ farm.

　　這里的over and over again就可以改為repeatedly，顯得更為簡(jiǎn)潔：

　　My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents’ farm.

　　只要大家能夠做到以上這兩點(diǎn)，小編相信各位同學(xué)的托福作文一定能給考官帶來(lái)更好的閱讀體驗(yàn)，作文得分自然也就愛(ài)水漲船高咯。