托福獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作難點(diǎn)話(huà)題思路解讀和高分范文賞析：teachers paid according to students

　　Should teachers be paid according to how much their students learn?

　　Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should be paid according to how much their students learn. Give specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

　　寫(xiě)作思路展開(kāi)結(jié)構(gòu)分析

　　不能同意。乍看起來(lái)(at the first glance)很有道理。問(wèn)題在于：教育不是商品。如何保證能夠確切地衡量學(xué)生究竟學(xué)到了多少?學(xué)生學(xué)到多少，并不是老師一個(gè)人的事情，還要看學(xué)生自身的素質(zhì)(quality);能力(capacity)等等。如果采取了這樣的方式，就會(huì)出現(xiàn)老師迎合(cater to/ pander to/ play up to students' taste)學(xué)生而不是引導(dǎo) (guide; lead)學(xué)生，違背了教育的原則。

　　本話(huà)題高分范文賞析

　　People usually believe that teachers have the most important job in all of society. They raise our children to be forward-thinking, bright individuals. They ensure that children get along with each other, and learn to work together as a team. As such, being a teacher typically means a stable paycheck. However, when some people propose that teachers should be paid according to how much their students learn, I can hardly agree. First of all, students may not be interested in learning. When students are not interested in learning, the teacher can hardly be held responsible. The teacher can grade them harshly, keep them in after class, and discipline them severely, but the students will still not learn if they do not want to. If the teacher is trying his/her best to teach the students, and the information is presented clearly and succinctly, he/she can do no better job. Moreover, there is a limit on how much a child can learn. If a teacher was to be paid according to how much his/her students learned, there would be a certain point where he/she could teach them no more. I remember when I was in high school, there would be moments in the year when I didn't think I could fit any more information into my head. This was not my teacher's fault, and the point is that I just was not absorbing the material. I think many teachers would find this problem if they were paid by how much their students learnt. Most importantly, teachers should not be paid according to how much their students learn because some of the lessons that a student learns cannot be measured by a test. We cannot simply give children a test to discover how much they have learnt in a class. Tests rarely measure one's social skills, one's ability to communicate, or one's ability to integrate successfully into the world. However, it is the teachers who help students to manifest these qualities.