雅思大作文語料庫：競(jìng)技體育是否最益于團(tuán)隊(duì)精神

Some people think that the best way to teach children to learn to cooperate with others is through team sports at school，to what extent do you agree or disagree?有人認(rèn)為：通過參加學(xué)校的體育運(yùn)動(dòng)，是使人學(xué)會(huì)合作的最佳方法，是否同意?

【雅思題庫】

Some people argue that schools should only offer subjects that are beneficial to students’ future careers. Other subjects, such as music and sports, are not important. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 有人認(rèn)為：學(xué)校應(yīng)該給孩子們提供便于就業(yè)的課程，其他課程，例如音樂課和體育課，不重要，是否同意這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)。

【布局圖】

首段：背景介紹 + 爭(zhēng)議焦點(diǎn) + 作家立場(chǎng)

二段：讓步原題觀點(diǎn)的合理性

三段：反駁原題觀點(diǎn)之不合理

尾段：再次亮明觀點(diǎn)

寫作類型：反對(duì)唯一性和最佳性

【作家立場(chǎng)】

鼓勵(lì)孩子們從事競(jìng)技體育活動(dòng)是培養(yǎng)他們合作精神和群體性經(jīng)驗(yàn)的有效策略之一，但是，這不是最佳的、唯一的方式。

【范文賞析】

【首段】背景介紹 + 爭(zhēng)議焦點(diǎn) + 作家立場(chǎng)

Growth education is one of the key words of a person’s development. People have been debating, for many years, whether the best approach to enhance children’s cooperative consciousness is through encouraging them to embark on sports-related activities at school without reaching any definite consensus. To voice my opinion, inspiring students to dive into sports events is one of the effective strategies to help them cultivate cooperation spirit and group experience, yet, it is not the best and only way.

【解析】

1. Growth education is one of the key words of a person’s development 成長(zhǎng)教育者個(gè)人的發(fā)展中至關(guān)重要。

2. embark on sports-related activities v從事和體育相關(guān)的活動(dòng)

3. Inspiring students to dive into sports events is one of the effective strategies to help them cultivate cooperation spirit and group experience. 鼓勵(lì)孩子們從事競(jìng)技體育活動(dòng)是培養(yǎng)他們的合作精神和群體性經(jīng)驗(yàn)的有效策略之一。

【二段】讓步原題觀點(diǎn)之合理性

Indeed, I have to concede that those who argue that sports activities can help young adults to nurture teamwork spirit and raise their awareness of cooperation are, to some extent, never without their reasons. Some people might argue that sports events can assist students in learning how to communicate and associate with people around them and thus improve their cooperation. To illustrate, in a basketball team, team member has to learn to tolerate and unite others, they must work together as a team and stick together as friends to win the victory. In this sense, campus activities can cultivate one’s cooperation spirit.

【解析】

1. nurture teamwork spirit and raise their awareness of cooperation 培養(yǎng)團(tuán)隊(duì)精神和合作意識(shí)

2. how to communicate and associate with people around them 學(xué)習(xí)如何與人交往交流

3. they must work together as a team and stick together as friends to win the victory. 他們必須團(tuán)結(jié)一致，相交如友，才能取得勝利。

【三段】反駁其不合理性：

Nevertheless，as for how to develop one’s teamwork sprit, there are still a great many other options available. First, it works for students to partake of group learning. For example，I once participated in a study group，we have to make joint efforts to finish the professor’s assignments. Each team member has to learn how to coordinate and work with others. Sometimes, one has to sacrifice his or her advantage to help the team stand out. Also, efforts could be made by parents to send children to summer or winter holiday camping, which is also an ideal way to strengthen students’ group consciousness and interpersonal skills. Eventually, it is duty of every individual to learn to be big heart and put himself or herself in others’ shoes and thus people can live in harmony with other peers.

【解析】

1. It works for students to partake of group learning 學(xué)生們參加小組學(xué)習(xí)也是起作用的。

2. make joint efforts to finish make joint efforts to finish the professor’s assignments v共同努力完成老師的任務(wù)

3. coordinate and work with others v與他人協(xié)調(diào)與合作

4. has to sacrifice his or her advantage to help the team stand out 犧牲自我優(yōu)勢(shì)，以幫助團(tuán)隊(duì)勝出

5. to learn to be big heart and put himself or herself in others’ shoes 學(xué)會(huì)心胸豁達(dá)，換位思考

6. people can live in harmony with other peers v可以與其他同齡人和諧共處

【尾段】再次亮明觀點(diǎn)+(總結(jié)理由)

In the final analysis, I would like to re-affirm my conviction that in addition to motivating students to participate in sports activities, there are still other ways available to make one become socially adequate and cooperative.

【解析】make one become socially adequate 使人在社交方面得心應(yīng)手，善于合作。

【全文點(diǎn)評(píng)】

本篇采取讓步反駁寫法，承認(rèn)原題觀點(diǎn)之合理性，反駁其局限性，為雅思常見寫作思路之一種。本文主題明確、布局清晰、例證飽滿、詞匯豐富、文風(fēng)樸素。可為考生研讀之佳作。