公司搬遷報(bào)告英語(yǔ)版-BEC商務(wù)英語(yǔ)初級(jí)課堂筆記 Unit 5B (3)

Writing: which relocation company should Fenway choose? Write a report comparing the two companies and making your recommendation. Write 120-140 words.

豐威公司應(yīng)該選擇那家安遷公司?寫(xiě)一份報(bào)告，把兩家公司做一比較并提出建議。字?jǐn)?shù)在120-140之間。

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A companion of ERS and worldwide relocation

Introduction

The aim of this report is to assess which of the two companies, ERS or Worldwide Relocation, would be the most suitable for the relocation of Fenway employees an their families from Seattle to Dublin.

Findings

Both ERS and Worldwide Relocation offer an accommodation and school search services. Both companies can organize visas and work permits. In addition to these basic services, ERS also offers removal and shipping assistance whereas Worldwide Relocation offers and integration programme and assistance with partner employment. The later is a key requirement for Fenway.

Conclusion

It was concluded that both companies go some way to fulfilling Fenway’s needs, but neither meets all its needs.

Recommendation

We would recommend that Worldwide Relocation be chosen to facilitate the relocation process as its service match Fenway’s requirements more closely than ERS’s do.