高中英語(yǔ)作文|幫助他人 快樂(lè)自己

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That day, Feb 12th, was my father's birthday. I went to buy a present for him. I wanted to say "thank you" to my father in the way.[1] I went home on[2] subway train. It was crowed there, but luckily I found a seat and sat down. I thought my father would felt overjoy[3] when he recived[receive] it .Just then I saw that an old lady got on the train. And she stood without a seat. I thought I would be ashamed if I did nothing. So I stood up and gave the lady my seat[4]. She thanked me again and again.
I feel happy, I meant it, when I do something to help others[5]. It is rewarding to give your kindniss[kindness] away. And it will make the world warmer.

修改意見(jiàn)：
[1] in the way 的意思是“擋路了，是妨礙”，此處要表達(dá)的應(yīng)該是用這種方式：in this way
[2] 乘地鐵回家：I went home by subway.
[3] Overjor是動(dòng)詞，使狂喜的意思，此處應(yīng)用形容詞，overjoyed
[4] so單獨(dú)引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句，沒(méi)有主句。Nothing后面改成逗號(hào)。I thought I would be ashamed if did nothing, so I stood up and let her take me seat.
[5] 這個(gè)插入語(yǔ)用的不正確，建議不要用I mean it, I mean it 是前面自己說(shuō)了一句話，說(shuō)完了，句號(hào)結(jié)束了。后面加這個(gè)話表示：我是認(rèn)真的！這里，如果真要插入就用：I think, I believe