托?？谡Z如何利用連詞來提分

　　下面是以同學(xué)針對問題“What is an activity that you enjoy doing with your friends and why? Please include specific examples and details in your explanation.”的回答。

　　There are two reasons why I think so. One reason is that playing sports help us create strong bonds of friendship. It creates many opportunities of cooperation if we have to beat others when play in a group.I don’t like exercising alone. It is really boring if you have to repeat some moves.I am really interested in playing sports with my friends.

　　第一句是總起句，應(yīng)該用表起始的連接詞，如: in the beginning, in the first place,等等;第二句是第一句的解釋，因此可以用that is to say, in other words等等來聯(lián)系這些關(guān)系。表遞進(jìn)的關(guān)系，可以用moreover。下面我們來看看修改后的答案。

　　As far as I am concerned, I really love playing sports with my friends. There are two reasons why I think so. Actually, one reason is that playing sports helps us create strong bonds of friendship. You know, it creates many opportunities of cooperation if we have to beat others when play in a group. Also, I don’t like exercising alone. Because it is really boring if you have to repeat some moves. For these two reasons, I am really interested in playing sports with my friends.

　　這樣看起來，用上連接詞以后，整個答案讀起來都通順了許多。

　　托?？谡Z連接詞分類整理

　　(1)表選擇關(guān)系或?qū)Φ汝P(guān)系的連接詞：either…or…, neither…nor, or, as well as…, and, both…and…等

　　(2)表因果關(guān)系或?qū)Φ汝P(guān)系的連接詞：therefore, so, as a result, as the result of…, because of, due to…,owing to, thanks to等。

　　(3)表時間順序的連接詞：the moment, as soon as, at first, then, later, meanwhyle, at the beginning, in the end, before long, for the firs(tsecond…)time, the minute等。

　　(4)表轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的連接詞：yet, and yet, but , while, on the contrary, on the other hand, however, at the same time(然而)等。

　　(5)表解釋說明的連接詞：that is, that is to say, in other words, such as, for instance, and so on, etc. and the like等。

　　(6)表遞進(jìn)關(guān)系的連接詞：not only…but(also), what, s more, what's worse, besides, in addition, worse still, moreover, above all等。

　　(7)表示總結(jié)的連接詞：in a word, on the whole, in short, briefly, in brief, to sum up, in all等。