My View on Double BA Degree

1.現(xiàn)在大學(xué)生讀雙學(xué)位的現(xiàn)象很常見

2.我對(duì)這一現(xiàn)象的看法

【參考范文】

Recently it has become a common phenomenon for college students to have two majors at the same time. In this way, they can get double BA degrees when they graduate from the university several years later.

Although it may bring unfavorable consequences, we can be sure to conclude that this practice is favorable on the whole. To begin with, most students will become more hardworking and efficient in order to finish the learning tasks satisfactorily. Moreover, with two degrees at hand after graduation, they will stand a better chance in the job market full of fierce competition. In the third place, as for today's university students, tuition and fees are becoming more and more expensive. If they can make achievements in study at school and find a satisfactory job afterwards, it will not be a big problem.

Weighing the pros and cons of such a new trend, we can naturally arrive at the conclusion that it is beneficial and rewarding. This system not only compels students to work hard, but also prepares them for the coming competition.

【點(diǎn)評(píng)】

首段直接點(diǎn)題，說(shuō)明現(xiàn)象;第二段分述三個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)，其中首句為讓步狀語(yǔ)從句，意思是“雖然可能帶來(lái)負(fù)面的后果，但總體上是有益的”;第三段呼應(yīng)第二段，得出結(jié)論。

范文首段提出大學(xué)生讀雙學(xué)位這一普遍現(xiàn)象;第二段分三點(diǎn)進(jìn)行論述，其中前兩點(diǎn)是優(yōu)點(diǎn)，即學(xué)生會(huì)更加勤奮，并且有利于他們?cè)诩ち业那舐毷袌?chǎng)中找到工作，最后一點(diǎn)是解釋可能帶來(lái)的學(xué)費(fèi)問(wèn)題并不嚴(yán)重;第三段下結(jié)論，呼應(yīng)第二段。

第二段第三句中的stand a better chance(of)表示“大有希望”;第三段末句中的compel sb.to do sth.表示“迫使某人做某事”。