第一段、總結(jié)描述
交代清楚故事涉及的人物、時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)： 主題句
第二段、具體描述
具體描述事件發(fā)生的原因、經(jīng)過(guò)和結(jié)果 起因+經(jīng)過(guò)+結(jié)果 第三段、對(duì)事件的分析 分析句1+分析句2+分析3
第二部分 記敘文題型作文寫(xiě)作范文練習(xí)
模版：
directions：for this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic the day my classmate fell ill.
1、簡(jiǎn)單描述一下這位同學(xué)生病的情況;
2、同學(xué)、老師和我是如何幫助他的;
3、人和人之間的這種相互關(guān)愛(ài)給我的感受是....
寫(xiě)作模板：
第一段：
開(kāi)篇句：about _____ o'clock one evening in _______, _____. 擴(kuò)展句：________. (展開(kāi)描述一下事件)
第二段：
主題句：without hesitation, _____. it wasn't long before _____. 擴(kuò)展句：1、one ______. 2、another _______. 3、our teacher _______.
第三段：
結(jié)尾句：is _______? who can tell ? but ______.
擴(kuò)展句：1、when ____ , people showed _____ spirit regardless of ____.
2、this kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice. 3、and it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world.
范文
about nine o'clock one evening in may, my roommate li ming was lying in bed, trembling with cold and having a cough.his head was aching so intensely that he kept groaning. his forehead felt very hot. we took his temperature. it was 38.5℃.
without hesitation, i dialed "120". it wasn't long before an ambulance arrived. one roommate brought a blanket for him. another supported him in the ambulance. our teacher insisted on giving him some money.
is he a suspedted sars patient? who can tell ? but we did't retreat. when the savage sars was spreading, people showed fearless spirit regardless of dangers to their own health.this kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice.and it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world.
