1. 題目涉及的現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單的描述,在描述的過(guò)程中將寫作引向文章的主題(這樣的描述可以自己控制,如果第一段落字?jǐn)?shù)單薄,可以適當(dāng)使描述具體化)。
2. 在第一步的基礎(chǔ)上給出觀點(diǎn),觀點(diǎn)視文章主旨可以分為:個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)(包括方法、途徑),和多方觀點(diǎn)(觀點(diǎn)從正反兩方面或者一個(gè)方面的多個(gè)層次闡述;在交待觀點(diǎn)是需要有原因和支持)。
3.個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)總結(jié)點(diǎn)題(同意異表),簡(jiǎn)要指出方法途徑,如果找不到具體的解決方法,則將話講得圓滑(如果正文中間觀點(diǎn)沒有必然沖突,則可以融合)。
A 1995.1 my view on the negative effects of some advertisements
社會(huì)上的廣告現(xiàn)象越來(lái)越多,很多的廣告對(duì)我們的社會(huì)有不良的影響-〉(廣告如何多:路邊大型廣告,報(bào)紙一半是廣告,電線桿上垃圾廣告,電視商業(yè)廣告頻繁。)
Today we live in a world of advertisement. Ads appear on broad side boards, take up much ofnewspaper coverage, slip their way onto walls and constantly interrupt TV programs. Howeverpervasive they are, (盡管他們四處充斥)they always produce a negative influence.
從觀點(diǎn)的多個(gè)層次描寫:1.白日搶劫——賣家通過(guò)彎曲夸大事實(shí)來(lái)欺騙消費(fèi)者購(gòu)買(化妝品);2.種下不良消費(fèi)習(xí)慣或者價(jià)值觀(香煙);3.污染環(huán)境(牛皮癬和校園商業(yè)海報(bào))。
To begin with, daylight robbery is made everyday occurrence (白日搶劫每天都在發(fā)生)as aresult of the negative effects of ads. Harmful ads exaggerate the functions and distort/ignore thefacts.(夸大功能,歪曲事實(shí)) Every means is tried to hook people into buying(為了誘導(dǎo)人們消費(fèi),不擇手段). Make-up promotion is a typical case in point.(化妝品促銷就是一個(gè)典型的例子)Furthermore, misleading ads plant in the mind (在腦海中植下)of consumers, especially youngpeople, a bad consumption habit or, even worse, corrupt values. For proof, look no further thancigarette selling. (香煙銷售就是一個(gè)典型的例子)Ads with the image of a smoking pop starbroadcast an irresistible message.(傳遞無(wú)法抗拒的信息) Last but not least, easily-printed postersand handouts have polluted our environment