英語六級命題作文：大學(xué)畢業(yè)生應(yīng)該買房還是租房?
- 經(jīng)典范文
- 結(jié)構(gòu)剖析
- 參考譯文
- 亮點(diǎn)詞匯
- 重點(diǎn)句背誦與仿寫
- 經(jīng)典范文
- 結(jié)構(gòu)剖析
- 參考譯文
- 亮點(diǎn)詞匯
- 重點(diǎn)句背誦與仿寫
Online Examination
The pilot project of online examinations recently is under heatedly discussed in the universities. Though online examinations have tried in some foreign countries, they are still fresh for Chinese colleges. People hold unanimous views on them.
Online examinations have their own special advantages of creating a just environment for tests, which is called green tests and permits no cheat because each student will have a different online paper. However, the popularization of online examination is unavoidably facing many challenges, such as the establishment of a complete performance criterion on online examination, principles of supervision and strict training of staff, but among them the most important one is the requirement for equipment. Due to the unbalanced development in education, many universities in some remote areas are incapable to purchase so many computers for testing and create an examination point.
In spite of so many challenges for online exams, as the reform of modern examinations I believe that they will be adopted in more examinations only if both government and universities could make full preparation. Every trial will be perfected in practice and there is no exception to online examinations. (190 words)
結(jié)構(gòu)剖析
文章分為三段
第一段概述了網(wǎng)考在部分大學(xué)開始推廣的事實(shí)。盡管在國外已經(jīng)采納了網(wǎng)考，但是，在國內(nèi)人們對它的態(tài)度仍然各不相同。
第二段闡述了網(wǎng)考優(yōu)勢和所面臨的挑戰(zhàn)。優(yōu)勢是它可以杜絕考試作弊。挑戰(zhàn)是它需要一系列的規(guī)章制度和監(jiān)管措施，以及設(shè)備等來保障它的順利進(jìn)行。
第三段介紹了作者對網(wǎng)考的展望，雖然網(wǎng)考的推廣過程會面對一些困難，但是只要政府和學(xué)?？梢宰龊贸浞值臏?zhǔn)備，這項改革措施一定會被更多的機(jī)構(gòu)采納，日趨完善的。
網(wǎng) 考
網(wǎng)考的試行近期在大學(xué)中受到熱烈的討論。雖然國外一些國家已經(jīng)嘗試過網(wǎng)考了，但對中國的大學(xué)來說，網(wǎng)考還是個新鮮事物。人們對網(wǎng)考的看法一致。
創(chuàng)造公平的考試環(huán)境，即所謂的綠色考試，不允許作弊，在這方面網(wǎng)考有它們獨(dú)特的優(yōu)勢，因為每個學(xué)生都將有一份不同的在線考卷。但是，網(wǎng)考的普及不可避免地會面臨許多挑戰(zhàn)，比如完善的網(wǎng)考成績衡量標(biāo)準(zhǔn)、監(jiān)管制度和受過嚴(yán)格訓(xùn)練的人員，但是這其中最重要的一點(diǎn)是對設(shè)備的要求。由于教育發(fā)展的不平衡，偏遠(yuǎn)地區(qū)的許多大學(xué)無法為了考試而購買那么多的電腦，也無法設(shè)立考點(diǎn)。
盡管網(wǎng)考面對許多挑戰(zhàn)，然而作為現(xiàn)代考試的一種改革，我相信它將在更多的考試中被采用，只要政府和大學(xué)都能做好充分的準(zhǔn)備。每一次嘗試都會在實(shí)踐上得以完善，對于網(wǎng)考來說也不例外。
pilot n. 領(lǐng)航員 v. 領(lǐng)航，駕駛
unanimous adj. 全體一致的
popularization n. 普及
criterion n. 標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，準(zhǔn)則
be incapable to 無法
examination point 考點(diǎn)
1. The pilot project of online examinations recently is under heatedly discussed in the universities. 網(wǎng)考的試行近期在大學(xué)中受到熱烈的討論。
2. Online examinations have their own special advantages of creating a just environment for tests, which is called green tests and permits no cheat because each student will have a different online paper. 創(chuàng)造公平的考試環(huán)境，即所謂的綠色考試，不允許作弊，在這方面網(wǎng)考有它們獨(dú)特的優(yōu)勢，因為每個學(xué)生都將有一份不同的在線考卷。
3. Every trial will be perfected in practice and there is no exception to online examinations. 每一次嘗試都會在實(shí)踐上得以完善，對于網(wǎng)考來說也不例外。
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Directions: With the soaring of the house price, the dream of having a house becomes unattainable for most of the new graduates. Should a College Graduate Rent or Purchase a House? Write a composition about this topic. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
Should a College Graduate Rent or Purchase a House?
With the soaring of the house price, the dream of having a house becomes unattainable for most of the new graduates. They face a dilemma of dwelling narrowly or renting a room.
People holding the idea of purchasing a house think that the advantages of owning a house of their own outweigh another choice. On the one hand, according to the historical record, house price is expected to rise in the future. The possession of a house is expected to make profits in the long run. On the other hand, a house belonging to yourself makes you feel safety and comfort. Nevertheless, dissenters do not agree with the idea. In their view, the house price is too high to afford for graduates. If graduates decide to buy a house, they are certain to increase the burden of their family.
In my opinion, it is more advisable to rent a house during the first years than to buy a house because it is unwise to buy a house at such a high price. It is reasonable to save money and purchase a house at a suitable time. Surely, graduates can decide when to buy a house in accordance with their family condition. (198 words)
結(jié)構(gòu)剖析
文章分為三段
文章第一段介紹了在房價高漲的背景下，高校畢業(yè)生面臨著買房還是租房的選擇。
第二段著重論述了雙方所持的不同理由。贊成買房的人們覺得買房可以使資產(chǎn)增值，同時自己擁有的房子可以提供安全和舒適感。反對者認(rèn)為現(xiàn)今房價過高，畢業(yè)后就買房會增加家庭的負(fù)擔(dān)。
第三段論述了作者對于上述問題的看法，作者傾向于畢業(yè)后先租房，然后在合適的時機(jī)買房。
大學(xué)畢業(yè)生應(yīng)該買房還是租房?
隨著房價的飆升，買房夢對于大部分剛剛畢業(yè)的學(xué)生來說變得遙不可及。他們在蝸居和租房之間面臨著兩難的選擇。
支持買房觀點(diǎn)的人認(rèn)為，擁有自己的房子的好處要超過租房的好處。一方面，根據(jù)以往的情況，房價預(yù)計將來還會上漲。從長遠(yuǎn)來看，擁有房子有可能會獲利。另一方面，擁有自己的房子會使你感到安全和舒適。然而，持異議者不同意這種觀點(diǎn)。在他們看來，房價太高了，畢業(yè)生不能承受。如果畢業(yè)生決定買房，他們必定會增加家庭的負(fù)擔(dān)。
我認(rèn)為，畢業(yè)后第一年里租房比買房更合適，因為以如此高的價格去買房很不明智。理智的做法是先攢錢，然后在合適的時間再買房。當(dāng)然，畢業(yè)生可以根據(jù)他們的家庭情況來決定何時買房。
unattainable adj. 難到達(dá)的
dilemma n. 進(jìn)退兩難
dwell v. 居住，存在
outweigh v. 比......為重，比......重要，比......有價值
possession n. 財產(chǎn)，所有，擁有
in one's view 據(jù)某人看來
unwise adj. 不聰明的
1. With the soaring of the house price, the dream of having a house becomes unattainable for most of the new graduates.隨著房價的飆升，買房夢對于大部分剛剛畢業(yè)的學(xué)生來說變得遙不可及。
2. People holding the idea of purchasing a house think that the advantages of owning a house of their own outweigh another choice. 支持買房觀點(diǎn)的人認(rèn)為，擁有自己的房子的好處要超過租房的好處。
3. In my opinion, it is more advisable to rent a house during the first years than to buy a house because it is unwise to buy a house at such a high price. 我認(rèn)為，畢業(yè)后第一年里租房比買房更合適，因為以如此高的價格去買房很不明智。
4. It is reasonable to save money and purchase a house at a suitable time. 理智的做法是先攢錢，然后在合適的時間再買房。
