Studying in Colleges or Through Internet?
When it comes to the choice between studying in traditional colleges and self-studying through Internet, different people hold different views. Some argue that they can learn better in colleges, while others believe that there are more advantages to studying through Internet.
In the eyes of the first group of people, studying in colleges is beneficial to their study for the following reasons. In the first place, they feel more at home in colleges, because to them, it's a more "natural" way of study. In the second place, they can communicate with the teachers and schoolmates easily, which will help them to develop their interpersonal skills.
In comparison, those who argue for self-study have their arguments as follows. On one hand, they can save a lot of time of going to and from school. On the other hand, they can listen to the lectures of all the best teachers available on the Internet. Therefore, they have a wide range of choices of teachers and lessons.
As discussed above, it is obvious that each side has its distinctive features. I think the best choice is to use the Internet as often as possible while staying on campus. (195 words)
結(jié)構(gòu)剖析
文章分為四段
第一段首句引出話題，提出在校學(xué)習(xí)和通過網(wǎng)絡(luò)學(xué)習(xí)這兩種方式，并指出不同的人持有不同的觀點(diǎn)，接著用some ... while others ...指出兩種截然相反的觀點(diǎn)。
第二段論證支持在校學(xué)習(xí)更好的觀點(diǎn)，并用in the first place和in the second place給出兩個(gè)支持的理由。
第三段論證贊成網(wǎng)絡(luò)學(xué)習(xí)更好的觀點(diǎn)，并用on one hand和on the other hand給出兩個(gè)方面的理由，最后用therefore總結(jié)該段的內(nèi)容。
第四段用I think...指出作者對(duì)這兩種學(xué)習(xí)方式的看法，總結(jié)全文。
在校學(xué)習(xí)，還是網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)?
對(duì)于選擇在傳統(tǒng)高校中學(xué)習(xí)，還是通過網(wǎng)絡(luò)自學(xué)，不同的人有著不同的看法。一些人認(rèn)為在高校中他們能學(xué)得更好，而另一些人則認(rèn)為網(wǎng)絡(luò)學(xué)習(xí)具有更多優(yōu)勢(shì)。
在第一種人的眼中，在高校中學(xué)習(xí)有利于他們的學(xué)業(yè)，原因如下：首先，在學(xué)校中他們感到輕松自在，這是一種更加"自然"的學(xué)習(xí)方式。其次，他們能夠輕松地與老師、同學(xué)溝通，這有助于他們培養(yǎng)人際關(guān)系技巧。
相比之下，那些贊成自學(xué)的人們觀點(diǎn)如下：一方面，他們能夠省下很多花在上、放學(xué)途中的時(shí)間。另一方面，他們可以在網(wǎng)上聽到所有的名師授課。因此，他們有很多的老師和課程可供選擇。
綜上所述，顯然二者都具有其鮮明的特點(diǎn)。我認(rèn)為，最佳選擇是在校期間盡量使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)資源。
when it comes to... 當(dāng)提及......
traditional adj. 傳統(tǒng)的
in the eyes of... 在......看來，在......的眼中
be beneficial to... 對(duì)......有益
communicate with 交流，溝通
interpersonal skills 人際交往的技巧
in comparison 相比較
available adj. 可利用的;可得到的
distinctive features 區(qū)別性特征
1. When it comes to the choice between studying in traditional colleges and self-studying through Internet, different people hold different views. 對(duì)于選擇在傳統(tǒng)高校中學(xué)習(xí)，還是通過網(wǎng)絡(luò)自學(xué)，不同的人有著不同的看法。
2. In the second place, they can communicate with the teachers and schoolmates easily, which will help them to develop their interpersonal skills. 其次，他們能夠輕松地與老師、同學(xué)溝通，這有助于他們培養(yǎng)人際關(guān)系技巧。
3. I think the best choice is to use the Internet as often as possible while staying on campus. 我認(rèn)為，最佳選擇是在校期間盡量使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)資源。
