英語六級命題作文：大學(xué)生應(yīng)該經(jīng)商嗎?
- 經(jīng)典范文
- 結(jié)構(gòu)剖析
- 參考譯文
- 亮點(diǎn)詞匯
- 重點(diǎn)句背誦與仿寫
Should a College Student Run a Business?
It's fashionable for college students to run a business of their own, such as opening an online store or establishing a company. However, can students become successful businessmen when they still study at the college?
Some people voted to support it and defend it with their reasons. Managing a company or other businesses not only enriches their working experience and promotes their ability of communication, but also helps them make money to pay for their tuition. On the contrary, those dissenters also adhere to their ideas. They consider that running a business will definitely distract students from their study and play a negative role in their knowledge acquisition. At the same time, those college students who run their business will possibly neglect to participate in campus activities.
I object to the idea of running a business while studying at the college campus. Four-year-study at the university is the golden time to pursue knowledge and truth. Only doing appropriately at an appropriate time can people obtain their success. (173 words)
結(jié)構(gòu)剖析
文章分為三段
第一段首句概括說明部分在校大學(xué)創(chuàng)業(yè)，且從事經(jīng)商的現(xiàn)象。
第二段主要論述了人們對在校大學(xué)生經(jīng)商所持有的不同態(tài)度。贊成的人們認(rèn)為大學(xué)生經(jīng)商不僅可以增加他們的工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)，提高他們的溝通能力，還可以通過賺錢解決所謂的學(xué)費(fèi)問題。反對的人們則認(rèn)為在校大學(xué)生經(jīng)商肯定會分散他們的學(xué)習(xí)精力，也有可能使他們忽視參加校園活動。
第三段主要闡述了作者的觀點(diǎn)。作者反對大學(xué)生經(jīng)商，認(rèn)為大學(xué)期間是讀書的黃金時(shí)間，人們應(yīng)該在合適的時(shí)候做合適的事情。
大學(xué)生應(yīng)該經(jīng)商嗎?
大學(xué)生自己經(jīng)商很流行，如開網(wǎng)上商店或創(chuàng)辦公司。但是，當(dāng)學(xué)生還在大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)的時(shí)候，他們能成為成功的商人嗎?
一些人投票支持，而且用他們的理由捍衛(wèi)這一做法。管理一家公司或從事其他商業(yè)活動不僅能豐富他們的工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)，提升他們的溝通能力，而且能幫助他們賺錢來支付學(xué)費(fèi)。相反，一些持異議者也很堅(jiān)持他們的想法。他們認(rèn)為，經(jīng)商必定會使學(xué)生分散他們學(xué)習(xí)的精力，并且在學(xué)習(xí)知識方面起著不利的影響。同時(shí)，那些經(jīng)商的大學(xué)生可能會忽視參與校園活動。
我反對還在大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)的學(xué)生經(jīng)商這一做法。大學(xué)4年的學(xué)習(xí)是追求知識和真理的黃金時(shí)期。只有在適當(dāng)?shù)臅r(shí)候做適當(dāng)?shù)氖虑?，人們才能獲得成功。
fashionable adj. 流行的
online store 網(wǎng)上商店
vote n. 投票，投票結(jié)果，選舉權(quán) v. 投票，選舉，表決
dissenter n. 持異議者
adhere to 堅(jiān)持
play a negative role in 在......扮演負(fù)面角色
acquisition n. 習(xí)得
1. It's fashionable for college students to run a business of their own, such as opening an online store or establishing a company.大學(xué)生自己經(jīng)商很流行，如開網(wǎng)上商店或創(chuàng)辦公司。
2. On the contrary, those dissenters also adhere to their ideas. 相反，一些持異議者也很堅(jiān)持他們的想法。
3. I object to the idea of running a business while studying at the college campus. 我反對還在大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)的學(xué)生經(jīng)商這一做法。
4. Only doing appropriately at an appropriate time can people obtain their success. 只有在適當(dāng)?shù)臅r(shí)候做適當(dāng)?shù)氖虑椋藗儾拍塬@得成功。
