英語六級(jí)命題作文：寵 物
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Pets
A pet is all animal which is raised or kept by people as a companion. In recent years, more and more people, old or young, rich or poor, like to keep a pet such as a dog, a cat, a monkey and so on.
Pets gain much love from people and they also bring people a lot of happiness. They not only are good friends to their masters but also become members of the family. Although they are not human beings, their behaviors sometimes are better than certain human beings, for they always remain obedient and loyal to the master. There are many stories that a pet saved his or her master's life or even traveled thousands of miles to return home. Moreover, trained pets are very helpful. For instance, a trained dog can help the blind to walk and a trained pig can even find out drugs from goods. But sometimes pets are trouble-makers. Some pets such as dogs or snakes may attack people unexpectedly. And a lot of people get infected because of the virus carried by their pets.
Referring to whether raising pets should be advocated or not, my opinion is, raising pets should be controlled. (199 words)
結(jié)構(gòu)剖析
文章分為三段
第一段引出話題，并指出寵物的定義以及人們對(duì)養(yǎng)寵物的熱衷。
第二段首句點(diǎn)出主人與寵物的關(guān)系，接著分析了人們喜歡寵物的原因，并舉例驗(yàn)證，比如寵物救主人，小狗幫助盲人和小豬找毒品。接著用But轉(zhuǎn)折指出了寵物對(duì)人的不利方面，比如"attack people"或者人被寵物攜帶的病毒感染。
第三段直接說明作者的觀點(diǎn)，即寵物飼養(yǎng)應(yīng)該受到控制。
寵 物
寵物是指所有由人類飼養(yǎng)或照顧并作為人類伴侶的動(dòng)物。近些年來，越來越多的人，或老或少，或窮或富，都喜歡飼養(yǎng)寵物，比如小狗、小貓、猴子等等。
寵物得到人們?cè)S多的寵愛，同時(shí)它們也給人們帶來了許多歡樂。它們不僅是主人的好朋友，而且也成為家庭中的一員。盡管寵物不是人類，但它們的行為有時(shí)候比某些人都好，因?yàn)樗鼈兪冀K服從主人并對(duì)主人忠誠。有許多故事都是講述寵物救主人的姓名，甚至走數(shù)千里找回到家。另外，訓(xùn)練有素的寵物對(duì)人很有幫助。例如，一只受過訓(xùn)練的小狗可以幫助盲人走路，一只受過訓(xùn)練的小豬甚至能從貨物中把毒品找出來。不過，有時(shí)寵物也是搗亂分子。有些寵物，比如狗或蛇，可能會(huì)意外地攻擊人。而且許多人由于寵物身上攜帶的病毒而受到感染。
談到是否應(yīng)該支持飼養(yǎng)寵物，我的觀點(diǎn)是，寵物飼養(yǎng)應(yīng)該受到控制。
companion n. 伙伴
obedient adj. 順從的，服從的
loyal adj. 忠誠的
trouble-maker n. 麻煩制造者
attack v. 襲擊，攻擊
unexpectedly adv. 出乎意料地
get infected 受感染
refer to 提到，涉及;查閱
advocate v. 提倡，主張
1. A pet is all animal which is raised or kept by people as a companion. 寵物是指所有由人類飼養(yǎng)或照顧并作為人類伴侶的動(dòng)物。
2. Although they are not human beings, their behaviors sometimes are better than certain human beings, for they always remain obedient and loyal to the master. 盡管寵物不是人類，但它們的行為有時(shí)候比某些人都好，因?yàn)樗鼈兪冀K服從主人并對(duì)主人忠誠。
3. Referring to whether raising pets should be advocated or not, my opinion is, raising pets should be controlled. 談到是否應(yīng)該支持飼養(yǎng)寵物，我的觀點(diǎn)是，寵物飼養(yǎng)應(yīng)該受到控制。
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