2021年英語六級作文范文:關(guān)于手機

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2021年09月26日

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　　滿分作文：About the Mobile Phone

　　Human creativeness is boundless. With the advance of science and technology, a completelynew means of communication — the Mobile Phone — came to the world, which, being notfixed in one place like ordinary phones, greatly facilitates telephone communication.

　　The mobile phone spreads so rapidly, first from businessmen to office workers, then to townshipenterprise managers, then to journalists and then nowadays to people of all trades andprofessions. At present, it seems that nowhere we do not hear the musical ringing of the mobilephone . People at first buy phones for convenience and later for fashion. To occupy thisincreasingly big market, the manufacturers are worrying their brains into making various typesof phones, large or small, coloured or black and white, multi-functional or with video cameras, to satisfy the needs. New fashions appear almost every day.

　　However, it is a great pity that the inventors of the mobile phone did not expect the negativeeffects caused by their scientific merits. Because of the abuse of the mobile phone, aircraftmechanism refuses to work properly, libraries are no longer so quiet, restaurants are filled withnoisy phone talk, teaching is incessantly interrupted by the signals...

　　Here, in the picture, a concert is going on. The pianist is supposed to be playing Beethoven'ssymphony when, all of a sudden, a man with a tie stood up, talking loudly over his mobilephone and telling his friend that he was attending a concert of classical music. The audienceshuddered with panic and the pianist was nearly shocked to death.

　　It is not infrequent that the above scene happens in public places. True, human beings havethe right to enjoy modern civilization, nevertheless, should they know how to conductthemselves in the modern civilized society?

　　CET6結(jié)構(gòu)分析：

　　·completely new means of communication — the Mobile Phone

　　·The rapid spreading of the mobile phone

　　* People who use the phone

　　* From convenience to fashion

　　* The manufacturers

　　·The negative effects of the phone , e.g.

　　·The interpretation of the cartoon

　　·Comments

　　CET6六級作文內(nèi)容分析：

　　本文為一篇圖畫作文, 文體為議論文。作者就“ 移動電話”發(fā)表自己的看法。文章開頭以“ 人類的創(chuàng)造力是無限的”一句引出移動電話的發(fā)明, 繼而在第二段中描述了移動電話的迅速發(fā)展。接著第三段筆鋒一轉(zhuǎn), 以However 引出一段反面文章, 略述移動電話的負面影響是發(fā)明者始料不及的, 由此切入畫面以為典型一例。結(jié)尾一段是作者的忠告— 享受現(xiàn)代文明也得講文明。

　　CET6六級作文萬能句型：

　　creativeness n. 創(chuàng)造性

　　boundless a. 無限的

　　means of commu nication 通訊工具

　　not fixed in one place 不固定在一處

　　facilitate v. 使容易

　　township enterprise 鄉(xiāng)鎮(zhèn)企業(yè)

　　journalist n. 記者

　　people of all trades and professions 各行各業(yè)人士

　　nowhe re we do not... 我們無處不……(雙重否定)

　　manufacturer n. 制造商, 廠家

　　wor ry one's brain into 絞盡腦汁, 費盡心機