六級(jí)高分作文_冬天來了，春天還會(huì)遠(yuǎn)嗎?

　冬天來了，春天還會(huì)遠(yuǎn)嗎?

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay commenting on the famous verse by the British poet Percy Bysshe Shelley, “If winter comes, can spring be far behind ?” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

審題立意

1. 導(dǎo)語解讀：要求考生通過評(píng)述英國詩人雪萊的著名詩句“春天來了，冬天還會(huì)遠(yuǎn)嗎？”寫一篇短文。

2. 文章立意：“冬天來了，春天還會(huì)遠(yuǎn)嗎？”寓示著艱難困苦終將過去，只要再堅(jiān)持一下，就可以渡過難關(guān)，迎來春天，這提醒我們始終抱著積極的人生態(tài)度，即使身處困境，也要滿懷希望，奮斗不息，永不放棄。

寫作思路

1. 第一段介紹雪萊的詩句，揭示其寓意：困難很快就會(huì)過去，我們要充滿希望，堅(jiān)持到底。

2. 第二段論述失敗和困難是生活中繞不過去的坎兒，只有勇敢地面對(duì)困難和失敗，才能繼續(xù)前行。

3. 第三段論述如何面對(duì)和克服困難。

參考范文

The famous remark “If winter comes, can spring be far behind?” means that difficulties will pass by very soon and we should not feel frustrated. 1 It reminds us to face the difficulty bravely and never to give up. 2

As a matter of fact, life is a mixture of success and failure as well as a combination of happiness and sadness. So we have to consider what we can do to tap our strengths to overcome difficulties and keep going when times are tough or we are confronted with hardships and even defeats. 3 Then how can we overcome difficulties? 4

For one thing 5 , hold a positive attitude toward your life. Enthusiastic attitude towards hardships is a crucial factor that will determine whether you can be successful or not. It allows you to rise up to any challenge in your life. For another 5 , set ambitious goals for yourself. Once you establish your goals, you will motivate yourself to achieve them step by step and the difficulties along the way will never stop you. Therefore, we need to make full use of our potentials to face the challenges and enjoy the pleasure of overcoming difficulties. 6

名言“如果冬天來了，春天還會(huì)遠(yuǎn)嗎？”意味著艱難困苦會(huì)很快消逝，我們不應(yīng)為其感到沮喪。這句話提醒我們要勇敢地去克服困難，決不放棄。

事實(shí)上，生活是成功與失敗、快樂與悲傷的混合體。所以，當(dāng)我們面對(duì)艱難困苦甚至失敗的時(shí)候，我們要想如何才能集中力量克服困難而繼續(xù)前進(jìn)。那么，如何才能克服困難呢？

首先，要對(duì)生活抱有積極的態(tài)度。對(duì)待困難的熱誠態(tài)度是決定你成功與否的重要因素。它讓你去應(yīng)對(duì)你生活中遇到的任何挑戰(zhàn)。其次，要設(shè)定一個(gè)有野心的目標(biāo)。一旦有了目標(biāo)，你就會(huì)激發(fā)自己一步一步去實(shí)現(xiàn)夢想，遇到困難也絕不會(huì)停下腳步。因此，我們要充分利用我們的潛能去面對(duì)挑戰(zhàn)并且享受克服困難所帶來的快樂。

范文點(diǎn)評(píng)

1. 開篇引入引語并簡要闡釋引語的含義。

2. 借引語含義引出克服困難的話題。

3. 闡述困難和失敗乃生活之常事，因此必須勇于面對(duì)和克服它們，而不能逃避。

4. 承上啟下，引出該如何克服困難。

5. 從兩個(gè)方面闡述如何克服困難，條理清晰，層次分明。

6. 末句總結(jié)全文，指出我們應(yīng)克服困難并享受克服困難所帶來的快樂。

要點(diǎn)用法

frustrated adj. 沮喪的

combination n. 混合物；結(jié)合；組合

be confronted with 面臨；面對(duì)

rise up to 迎接，應(yīng)對(duì)

ambitious adj. 有雄心的

make full use of 充分利用

potential n. 潛能，潛力 adj. 潛在的

句法點(diǎn)評(píng)

1. As a matter of fact, life is a mixture of success and failure as well as a combination of happiness and sadness.

本句中as well as表示“也，而且”，意思上相當(dāng)于and，連接兩個(gè)并列、對(duì)等成分：a mixture of success and failure和a combination of happiness and sadness。

2. Enthusiastic attitude towards hardships is a crucial factor that will determine whether you can be successful or not.

本句中that引導(dǎo)定語從句，該定語從句中嵌套著whether...or not引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，作determine的賓語。