六級高分作文_低碳生活

　低碳生活

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Low-Carbon Living following the outline given below. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words:

Many people have embraced a green lifestyle—low-carbon living.

Why should we live a low-carbon life?

What should we do?

審題立意

1. 導語解讀：要求考生按照給定的提綱就“低碳生活”這一話題寫一篇作文。

2. 文章立意：低碳生活是環(huán)保所需，每個人都應當踐行低碳生活方式。要實現(xiàn)低碳生活方式，政府及個人都需付出努力。

寫作思路

1. 第一段引出話題——低碳生活方式。

2. 第二段闡述為何要踐行低碳生活方式。

3. 第三段闡述政府和個人所應采取的具體措施。

參考范文

Low-Carbon Living

With increasing consciousness of environmental protection, many people around the world have embraced a green lifestyle—low-carbon living. 1 It is believed that if people consume less resources, the living conditions will be better.

The emergence of this trend is mainly due to the worsening environ-ment on the earth. 2 Human beings are exhausting energy resources and emitting greenhouse gases, which changed our climate and led to a chain of terrible consequences. Therefore, people should live a low-carbon life to protect our earth. 3

How do we realize it? 4 In the first place 5 , the government should limit cars because car exhaust contributes to air pollution and citizens should be encouraged to take public transportation. Besides 5 , people had better not use disposable plastic bags but the ones that can be reused. Moreover 5 , we should try our best to save energy in our daily life—switch off the lights the moment we leave a room, turn off the tap in time, and reuse textbooks and so on.

低碳生活

隨著人們環(huán)保意識的不斷增強，世界上有很多人擁抱了一種綠色的生活方式——低碳生活。人們相信，如果消耗的資源少一些，生活環(huán)境就會好一些。

這種趨勢的出現(xiàn)主要是由于地球環(huán)境趨于惡化。人類消耗能源，排放溫室氣體，而這些行為改變了地球氣候并導致了一系列嚴重的后果。因此，人們應當過低碳生活以保護地球。

如何做到低碳生活呢? 首先，政府應當限制汽車數(shù)量，因為汽車尾氣加重了空氣污染，同時，應鼓勵市民乘坐公共交通工具出行。另外，人們最好不要使用一次性塑料袋，而應該使用可重復利用的袋子。再者，我們應該在日常生活中盡最大的努力節(jié)約能源：在離開房間時關燈，及時關水龍頭，重復利用課本等。

范文點評

1. 點出世界上很多人擁抱低碳的生活方式。

2. 段首句緊扣提綱，點出低碳生活趨勢出現(xiàn)的原因。

3. 段尾句做出小結，與段首句前后呼應。

4. 以問句的形式開頭，增強了語氣，同時體現(xiàn)了語言的多樣性。

5. 從三個方面闡述政府和個人應該做出的努力。

要點用法

consciousness n. 意識

embrace v. 擁抱

due to 由于

exhaust v. 耗盡，使枯竭

emit v. 排放

lead to 導致

a chain of 一系列

consequence n. 結果，后果

consume v. 消耗

car exhaust 汽車尾氣

disposable adj. 一次性的

reuse v. 再利用

句法點評

1. Human beings are exhausting energy resources and emitting greenhouse gases, which changed our climate and led to a chain of terrible consequences.

本句中which引導非限制性定語從句，修飾前面的整個主句，指出人們消耗能源、排放溫室氣體所造成的后果。

2. Moreover, we should try our best to save energy in our daily life—switch off the lights the moment we leave a room, turn off the tap in time, and reuse textbooks and so on.

用moreover引出第三層面的建議，接著具體舉出了三個日常生活中常見的例子來加以說明，破折號起到解釋說明的作用。