六級(jí)高分作文_關(guān)于職業(yè)定位和目標(biāo)
關(guān)于職業(yè)定位和目標(biāo)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Occupation Orientation and Career Goal . You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words according to the following guidelines:
Senior undergraduates are facing career choices.
To figure out your occupation orientation and career goal contributes to your career development.
What should we do to develop a desirable career?
審題立意
1. 導(dǎo)語解讀：要求考生根據(jù)提綱的內(nèi)容就“職業(yè)定位和目標(biāo)”這一話題進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)述，并解釋。
2. 文章立意：要想畢業(yè)時(shí)找到較為理想的工作，就必須充分認(rèn)識(shí)到職業(yè)定位和目標(biāo)規(guī)劃的重要性。
寫作思路
1. 第一段指出事實(shí)：大學(xué)生就業(yè)已成為一個(gè)難題。
2. 第二段闡述造成大學(xué)生就業(yè)難的原因：高校擴(kuò)招，經(jīng)濟(jì)不景氣，職業(yè)定位不準(zhǔn)等。
3. 第三段闡述若想找到理想的工作，應(yīng)在找工作前做好充分準(zhǔn)備。
參考范文
Occupation Orientation and Career Goal
There is no doubt that job hunting is a grave problem with which college graduates are confronted. 1
There are various reasons for graduates’ being increasingly difficult to secure an ideal job. 2 For example, colleges and universities have enrolled so many students that the number of graduates is far greater than needed in the market. And the job vacancies are insufficient during the economic depression. Nevertheless, as far as I am concerned, the most critical factor is that a large number of college students haven’t figured out right occupation orientation or career goal before they really enter the society. In reality, both occupation orientation and career goal are crucial to one’s career development. If one intends to find an ideal job, here are several recommendations.
Above all 3 , college students should seek their own orientation, analyze their personalities and find out their vocational interests, in order to know what jobs they are suitable for and capable of. Then full preparation should be made. Second 3 , job hunters need to make all-round analysis of the job market and professional situation, finding a proper place after considering social needs and personal interests. What’s more 3 , the graduates should set both long-term and short-term goals, making mature and rational choices according to different situations at different career development stages.
職業(yè)定位和目標(biāo)
毫無疑問，找工作是大學(xué)生正面臨的一個(gè)嚴(yán)肅問題。
大學(xué)畢業(yè)生找到一份理想工作越來越難，原因有很多。比如說，高校招收的學(xué)生太多，以至于畢業(yè)生的數(shù)量遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)高于市場(chǎng)的需求。另外，在經(jīng)濟(jì)蕭條期間，空缺職位往往不足。然而，在我看來，最關(guān)鍵的要素是很多大學(xué)生在真正進(jìn)入社會(huì)之前沒有找準(zhǔn)正確的職業(yè)定位或設(shè)立正確的職業(yè)目標(biāo)。事實(shí)上，職業(yè)定位和目標(biāo)對(duì)于職業(yè)發(fā)展來說至關(guān)重要。若想要找到理想的工作，這里有幾條建議可供參考。
首先，大學(xué)生在畢業(yè)前應(yīng)找好自己的定位，分析自己的性格特征，找準(zhǔn)職業(yè)興趣，看自己適合做什么,能做什么，并為之做好充分的準(zhǔn)備。其次，求職者應(yīng)全方位分析職業(yè)行情和職場(chǎng)形式，在社會(huì)需求和個(gè)人興趣之間尋找切合點(diǎn)。此外，畢業(yè)生要制定長(zhǎng)期和短期目標(biāo)，根據(jù)所處環(huán)境不同和職業(yè)發(fā)展階段不同作出成熟理性的選擇。
范文點(diǎn)評(píng)
1. 開篇簡(jiǎn)要說明客觀事實(shí)：大學(xué)生找工作不易。
2. 自然過渡，引出大學(xué)生難找工作的原因。
3. 采用分點(diǎn)論證的方法，列舉對(duì)職業(yè)定位和目標(biāo)確定的建議和措施，恰如其分。
要點(diǎn)用法
secure v. 得到
vacancy n. 空缺
insufficient adj. 不充足的
orientation n. 定位，定向
in reality 事實(shí)上
vocational adj. 職業(yè)的
rational adj. 理性的
句法點(diǎn)評(píng)
1. There is no doubt that job hunting is a grave problem with which college graduates are confronted.
開篇首句使用了There is no doubt that...句型，這是六級(jí)作文中闡述現(xiàn)象時(shí)常使用的句式，意為“毫無疑問，……”，類似的表達(dá)方法還有There is no denying that...
2. If one intends to find an ideal job, here are several recommendations.
該句型是表達(dá)提出建議的常用句式。
