六級(jí)高分作文_體育精神

　體育精神

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on sportsmanship according to the following situation. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

Suppose you have watched the FIFA World Cup finals and you get excited about the game, what’s the most appealing to you about the game and what kind of sportsmanship you have felt?

審題立意

1. 導(dǎo)語解讀：要求考生根據(jù)情景內(nèi)容就“體育精神”這一話題進(jìn)行寫作。

2. 情景解讀：假設(shè)你觀看了足球世界杯決賽圈的比賽，簡(jiǎn)單介紹該比賽最吸引人之處及其所體現(xiàn)出的體育精神。

3. 文章立意：比賽中，體育精神是支撐運(yùn)動(dòng)員堅(jiān)持到最后的重要因素；同樣這種精神也適用于普通人，若想實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的理想，也應(yīng)秉承這一精神。

寫作思路

1. 第一段簡(jiǎn)要描述足球世界杯最吸引你的地方，然后提出比賽體現(xiàn)出了“永不放棄”的體育精神。

2. 第二段通過因果分析和舉例說明的方法闡述這種體育精神，體育賽事體現(xiàn)體育精神，新聞報(bào)道也宣傳體育精神。

3. 第三段呼應(yīng)文章論點(diǎn)，再次強(qiáng)調(diào)“永不放棄”的體育精神對(duì)有夢(mèng)想的普通人同樣有益。

參考范文

Among all the matches of 2014 FIFA World Cup, the most appealing to me was the one between Argentina and Iran in which Messi scored the goal in stoppage time and put Argentina through to the last 16. 1 I will never forget the day on which a kind of sportsmanship called “Never give up” astounded me. 2

“Never give up” is easier said than done. In any sports events, nearly every sportsman is ever tested to the utmost. However 3 , there is only one gold medal, and people would never know who the winner will be until the last minute. Hence 3 , if they gave up halfway, their chances of tasting victory would be zero forever. That’s why we often hear in sports news that many competitors continue their trainings and contests with their injuries and illnesses. 3 It is the sportsmanship that stimulates them to persist in the end.

As for me—an ordinary person, I have an unshakeable faith in the spirit of perseverance while doing everything that is worth doing. Never give up your dream no matter what difficulties you might encounter on the path to it. 4

在2014國際足聯(lián)世界杯所有的比賽中，最吸引我的是阿根廷對(duì)伊朗的比賽。在那場(chǎng)比賽中，梅西在補(bǔ)時(shí)階段的進(jìn)球使阿根廷擠進(jìn)16強(qiáng)。我永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)忘記那一天，有一種叫做“永不放棄”的體育精神震撼了我。

“永不放棄”說起來容易做起來難。在任何體育賽事中，幾乎每個(gè)運(yùn)動(dòng)員都接受過極限的考驗(yàn)。然而，金牌只有一枚，不到最后一分鐘永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)知道贏家是誰。因此，如果半途而廢，就永遠(yuǎn)沒有機(jī)會(huì)品嘗勝利的滋味。這就是為什么從體育新聞中我們經(jīng)常會(huì)聽到許多運(yùn)動(dòng)員帶傷帶病堅(jiān)持訓(xùn)練和參賽的消息。激勵(lì)著他們堅(jiān)持到最后的就是體育精神。

至于像我這樣的普通人，在做每一件值得去做的事情的時(shí)候，都會(huì)對(duì)堅(jiān)持不懈的精神懷有一種毫不動(dòng)搖的信念。無論在通往夢(mèng)想的道路上會(huì)遇到多少困難，請(qǐng)永遠(yuǎn)不要放棄。

范文點(diǎn)評(píng)

1. 開篇簡(jiǎn)要描述情景內(nèi)容，并根據(jù)作文要求指出最吸引人的是比賽中梅西在補(bǔ)時(shí)階段的進(jìn)球。

2. 自然過渡，引出自己的觀點(diǎn)，緊扣作文話題。

3. 通過因果分析和舉例說明的方法進(jìn)行立論，陳述自己的觀點(diǎn)，并巧妙使用承上啟下的連接詞。

4. 末段總結(jié)全文，重申觀點(diǎn)“永不放棄”，并指出非體育界的追夢(mèng)人也應(yīng)懷有堅(jiān)持不懈的信念。

要點(diǎn)用法

stoppage time 補(bǔ)時(shí)階段

put through 完成；使通過

astound v. 使震撼

utmost n. 極限

stimulate v. 激勵(lì)

persist v. 堅(jiān)持

as for 至于

unshakeable adj. 堅(jiān)定不移的

perseverance n. 堅(jiān)持不懈

encounter v. 遭遇

句法點(diǎn)評(píng)

1. However, there is only one gold medal, and people would never know who the winner will be until the last minute.

這個(gè)句子使用了“not...until...”結(jié)構(gòu)，引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句。

2. Never give up your dream no matter what difficulties you might encounter on the path to it.