高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文:2018年江蘇卷2

2018年江蘇卷

書(shū)面表達(dá)(滿分25分)

請(qǐng)閱讀下面文字，并按照要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的文章。

【寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容】

1.用約30個(gè)詞概括上述利用排名( ratings)進(jìn)行消費(fèi)的現(xiàn)象；

2.談?wù)勀闳绾慰创M(fèi)排名，然后用2-3個(gè)理由或論據(jù)支撐你的看法。

【寫(xiě)作要求】

1.寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中不能直接引用原文語(yǔ)句；

2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；

3.不必寫(xiě)標(biāo)題

【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】

內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。

【滿分范文】

Possible version two:

   Nowadays, most commodities or services are rated through certainchannels. These ratings,  easy to access,are playing an increasingly important role in customers' purchase decision.However, results are sometimes unsatisfactory.

   There is no denying that such ratings might bring convenience toconsumers, but they are often misleading and unreliable. As we all know, mostof the ratings are based on others’ judgment on the product or serviceconcerned. Every judgment comes from a specific need or a unique psychologicalstate. Apparently, blindly following others' advice will affect our ownjudgment. Another fact should not be neglected that some of the ratings are theoutcome of a careful manipulation of companies or sellers. It has become acommon practice for some to pay

for good ratings on their products orservices so as to increase their sales.

   Therefore, we should give a second thought to these ratings whenever we goshopping.

可能的版本2:

如今，大多數(shù)商品或服務(wù)都是通過(guò)一定的渠道進(jìn)行評(píng)級(jí)的。這些易于獲取的評(píng)級(jí)在消費(fèi)者的購(gòu)買(mǎi)決策中扮演著越來(lái)越重要的角色。然而，結(jié)果有時(shí)并不令人滿意。

不可否認(rèn)，這樣的評(píng)級(jí)給消費(fèi)者帶來(lái)了便利，但往往具有誤導(dǎo)性和不可靠。我們都知道，大多數(shù)的評(píng)級(jí)是基于他人對(duì)相關(guān)產(chǎn)品或服務(wù)的判斷。每一個(gè)判斷都來(lái)自于一種特定的需求或一種獨(dú)特的心理狀態(tài)。顯然，盲目聽(tīng)從別人的建議會(huì)影響我們自己的判斷。另一個(gè)不應(yīng)被忽視的事實(shí)是，一些評(píng)級(jí)是公司或賣(mài)方精心操縱的結(jié)果。對(duì)一些人來(lái)說(shuō)，付費(fèi)已經(jīng)成為一種慣例

對(duì)他們的產(chǎn)品或服務(wù)的良好評(píng)價(jià)，以增加他們的銷(xiāo)售。

因此，我們?cè)谫?gòu)物時(shí)應(yīng)該重新考慮這些評(píng)級(jí)。