雅思作文之比較不同觀點(diǎn)的優(yōu)劣
TOPIC: Some people believe that A while others consider B more appropriate. Give advantages and disadvantages of the two positions and explain which position you support.
MODEL (1)
A and B are two totally different ideas that have caused heated debate over a long period of time. Anyway, I agree with the idea of A. However, it is unfair to say which is better than the other if we don’t see both sides of the story in the following paragraphs.
Some people believe B because①. These people point out the fact that②. They also argue that ③.
However, other people stand on a very different ground. They believe that④. They firmly point out that⑤. An example can give the details of this argument: ⑥. In addition, ⑦.
In a word, A is too tempting not to be chosen. A, as shown above, has ⑧. ⑨.
?、偃藗冎С諦的第一個(gè)原因
?、谶M(jìn)一步闡述支持B的第一個(gè)原因
?、壑С諦的第二個(gè)原因
?、苤С諥的第一個(gè)原因
?、葸M(jìn)一步闡述支持A的第一個(gè)原因
⑥舉例說明支持A的第一個(gè)原因
?、咧С諥的第二個(gè)原因
?、噙x擇A的第一個(gè)好處
?、徇x擇A的第二個(gè)好處
MODEL (2)
Some people believe that①. Other people take the view that②. While both methods may have their advantages and disadvantages, they can be applied under different circumstances. Afterwards, I will explain my opinion about it.
For A, ③
But this also demonstrates that④
Moreover, ⑤
B, on the other hand, ⑥. For example, ⑦.
In my opinion, the advantages of B are more than those of A because B fits me better in two ways; First⑧. Second, ⑨.
?、偃藗兊牡谝环N觀點(diǎn)
?、谌藗兊牡诙N觀點(diǎn)
?、跘的一個(gè)優(yōu)勢(shì)
④A所隱含的劣勢(shì)
?、軦的一個(gè)大缺點(diǎn)
?、轇的一個(gè)明顯優(yōu)勢(shì)
⑦舉例說明B的優(yōu)勢(shì)
?、鄬?duì)我來講，B的第一個(gè)優(yōu)勢(shì)
?、釋?duì)我來講，B的第二個(gè)優(yōu)勢(shì)
