寫作語料庫：人們?nèi)绾翁幚砩詈褪聵I(yè)的矛盾

　　【工作類】人們難以平衡生活和事業(yè)的原因和解決策略

　　Currently，many people fail to balance the work with the other parts oflives, what are the reasons and how to solve it?現(xiàn)在，一些人難以平衡工作和生活的其他部分，原因何在，如何解決?(2012年3月8日)

　　【頭腦風暴】

　　“我只想按照自己內(nèi)心的想法去生活，為何這也如此艱難?”有時候，我們想要上升，卻又缺乏力量，我們想要后退，又不甘心，欲求而不得的焦躁，正是人生的困頓所在。“吾欲乎遑遑欲何之。”我的心啊，你為何如此不安寧，我的人生，你到底要走向哪里?只是，無論生活如何困頓、迷茫，只要我們還在為夢想奮力的路上，明天的太陽就一定是美麗的。

　　【寫作目的】本篇將會探究下人們未能處理家庭和生活矛盾的原因，再提出解決策略。

　　【思路拓展】

　　人們難以平衡工作和生活的原因解讀：

　?、佻F(xiàn)代人對于生活的欲求更多，人，若想專業(yè)上脫穎而出，事業(yè)上高歌猛進，就要比常人努力，因此，一個人在工作中花費的時間越多，一個可以分配給家庭生活、健康管理和個人愛好的時間就越少。

　?、诠ぷ骺竦默F(xiàn)象可以被歸結為工作的壓力和競爭的激烈，多數(shù)情況下，人想要事業(yè)中出類拔萃，就要奮發(fā)圖強，因此，很多職場新人只能全心工作。

　　人們努力平衡工作和生活的解決策略：

　　① 企業(yè)應幫助職員緩壓，建立理性的工作制，提倡健康的工作方式，畢竟，無論工作學習，勤奮高效才是我們應努力追求的。

　?、?對于個人而言，我們應該轉變心態(tài)，事業(yè)的成功不是人生唯一目的，努力工作是為了去創(chuàng)造和享受美好人生，但是，工作不應成為負累。無論多忙，人應牢記：家庭生活和健康管理也是重要的，我們不該把沒有完成的工作帶回家，也應規(guī)律運動、發(fā)展愛好、拓寬交友圈。

　　【范文賞析】

　　【首段】 背景介紹 + 問題影響 + 寫作目的

　　Alarmingly, there is a growing awareness that a great many employees findit hard to strike a proper balance between career and life, some people fail tocare about the health management and the cultivation of new hobby. The failureof tackling the tense relationship between career development and private lifewill have a really adverse influence. This essay aims to explore the reasons whyit is far from easy to perfectly balance the job and life and then presentsolutions

　　【解析】

　　1. Alarmingly, there is a growing awareness that …… 令人擔憂的是，人們漸漸認識到……

　　2. it is far from easy to do sth 做……很難

　　3. The failure of tackling the tense relationship between careerdevelopment and private life will have a really adverse influence.未能合理安排處理事業(yè)和個人生活的確帶來很多不利影響。

　　【二段】人們難以平衡生活和事業(yè)的原因解讀

　　The potential reasons of tense relationship between career and personallife are manifold. First, to zero in on career can be mainly owed to one’sinfinite desire for life. More precisely, many young people desire to outshineothers in their careers. To fulfill their rosy dreams, they have to workextremely hard. Thereby, the more time one spends on career, the less time onecan allocate to other activities such as family life, health management orpersonal hobbies. Also, excessive workload and fierce competition that is whynumerous young adults have to fully focus on jobs. More precisely，A new employeeis sure to be eliminated by the hot competition if he or she slackens efforts atself-improvement.

　　【解析】

　　1. To zero in on career can be mainly owed to one’s infinite desire forlife. 全心專注于事業(yè)可以被歸結為人們對于生活的無盡渴望。

　　2. A new employee is sure to be eliminated by the hot competition if he orshe slackens efforts at self-improvement. 如果職場新人在自我提升方面有所放松，他注定會被激勵的競爭所淘汰。

　　【三段】 人們努力平衡工作和生活的解決策略

　　Considering the conflict between career and life, it is high time that weadopted effective measures. Initially, it is imperative for the relevantcompanies to reduce the heavy workload and create healthy work style. Virtually,to popularize a reasonable mode of work not only brings happiness to the workersbut also enhances the efficiency of working. Also, efforts should be made byeveryone to change their opinion towards career. Specifically, people shouldclearly know that success in career will never be the sole aim of life, to workdiligently is to create and savor wonderful life. No matter how busy one mightbe, one should always bear in mind that family life tops all and he or sheshould never bring unfinished working tasks to home.

　　【解析】

　　1. Considering the conflict between career and life, it is high time thatwe adopted effective measures. 考慮到事業(yè)和生活的矛盾，我們理應采取一些有效的措施。

　　2. Also, efforts should be made by everyone to change their opinion towardscareer. 個人應該努力改變職業(yè)觀。

　　3. To work diligently is to create and savor wonderful life.努力工作是為去創(chuàng)造和品位精彩人生。

　　4. Family life tops all. 家庭生活最重要

　　5. He or she should never bring unfinished working tasks to home.我們不應該把未完的工作帶回家。

　　【尾段】 作家立場

　　In closing，my stand is that it is no easy task to keep a appropriatebalance between career and life at times, however, one should make efforts torealize this balance.

　　【解析】

　　1. in closing，my stand is that …… 總之，我的立場是……

　　2. it is no easy task to do sth v做……絕非易事

　　3. at times adv 有時候