雅思小作文：99%的考生都會犯的錯誤

　　一般沒有had a decrease/ increase的說法，一般是saw a decrease/increase

　　Increased, decreased, declined 這些上升和下降的詞都沒有被動語態(tài)

　　當(dāng)the number, the amount, the figure， the proportion做句子的主語的時候，不能用account for

　　The proportion of 后面不能加句子，譬如說 the proportion of people worked in the healthcare sector是錯的，要寫成the proportion of people who worked in the healthcare sector

　　The amount不能替換the number

　　Ratio和rate一般不能替代proportion和percentage

　　Picture 不能替換graph 或者chart

　　不要用定語從句讀數(shù)據(jù)，譬如說 the crime rate in the US was highest, which was 0.3%. 這里的which was 直接省略。

　　結(jié)尾段一般不寫in conclusion

　　結(jié)尾段不能寫數(shù)據(jù)

　　一般是compared with，而不是comparing with

　　Followed by后面要寫名詞，而且這個名詞要和主句的主語性質(zhì)差不多

　　Reach 讀數(shù)據(jù)的時候不能加to或者at, 直接加數(shù)據(jù)就可以