雅思寫(xiě)作寫(xiě)出有效作文的五要素

雅思寫(xiě)作想要得高分首先要做到寫(xiě)出的作文是有效的，下面小編為大家整理了雅思寫(xiě)作寫(xiě)出有效作文的五要素，僅供參考!

句子結(jié)構(gòu)是雅思寫(xiě)作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)“語(yǔ)法的多樣性與準(zhǔn)確度”中一項(xiàng)十分重要的考量因素，但這并不意味著要求考生具備寫(xiě)長(zhǎng)難句的能力。在追求輸出像雅思閱讀一樣精到的語(yǔ)言之前，我們首先要確保的應(yīng)當(dāng)是寫(xiě)出來(lái)的句子是正確的。有效的句子甚而段落通常應(yīng)當(dāng)同時(shí)滿足以下五個(gè)要素：一致、連貫、簡(jiǎn)潔、強(qiáng)調(diào)、多樣。

1. 一致：如句內(nèi)的邏輯關(guān)系，注意檢查是否存在簡(jiǎn)單推論、邏輯殘缺、邏輯悖論、依賴偏見(jiàn)等。

Born in a small town in South Chinain the early 1950s, he grew up to be a famous musician.

→ He was born in a small town in South China in the early 1950s. In his childhood he liked to sing songs. Later he entered a conservatory. In the 1970s he became a famous musician.

2. 連貫：這個(gè)問(wèn)題在平行結(jié)構(gòu)、共用主語(yǔ)、使用指代的情況下尤其需要注意。

We thought she was charming, intelligent, and a very capable young woman.

→ We thought she was charming, intelligent, and very capable.

Or: We thought she was a charming, intelligent, and very capable young woman.

He was knocked down by a bicycle, but it was not serious.

→ He was knocked down by a bicycle, but was not badly injured.

Looking out of the window, the grassland stretches as far as the eye can reach.

→ Looking out of the window, we can see the grassland stretching as far as the eye can reach.

Or: Outside the window, the grassland stretches as far as the eye can reach.

He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, which nobody believed.

→ He gave a reason, which nobody believed, for not attending the meeting.

Or: He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, a reason which nobody believed.

3. 簡(jiǎn)潔：英美文化推崇坦率和直接，通常不需要體現(xiàn)咱儒家文化的含蓄和委婉。

It was small in size and blue in colour.

→ It was small and blue.

He usually likes to drink all kinds of wines that are produced in France.

→ He prefers French wines.

4. 強(qiáng)調(diào)：正如每篇文章都要有中心思想(main idea)，每個(gè)段落都要有主題句(topic sentence)一般，每個(gè)句子都要圍繞一個(gè)中心觀點(diǎn)清晰地呈現(xiàn)出作者想要表現(xiàn)的重點(diǎn)。

He is modest and hardworking and is a good student.

→ He is a good student, modest and hardworking.

There is a big tree, which is said to be 300 years old, in the temple.

→ In the temple there is a big tree, which is said to be 300 years old.

At the sight of the disorderly crowd, he was aware that something bad would be possible.

→ The moment he saw the disorderly crowd, he knew that something bad would happen.

5. 多樣：中文重重復(fù)，英文重替代，中英差異使然。