雅思寫作高分范文：淡水匱乏的原因及解決

題目：淡水短缺的原因和建議措施

People around the world are confronted with serious shortage of fresh water. What are the reasons ? How to solve the problem?

分析:

這是原因分析的題目, 要求考生能夠從不同的側(cè)面分析一個現(xiàn)象或者事件發(fā)生的原因或者誘發(fā)因素. 考生答卷第一段應該陳述命題的問題, 中間主體鍛煉需要包含至少兩個方面, 一般三個方面的因素分析. 這要求考生陳述原因時候, 段落的層次安排符合邏輯思維習慣.

原因分析題目是英語寫作考試的大題型之一. 考生平素需要訓練自己觀察和分析的能力. 那些希望背誦一篇范文就上考場的被動性學習方法絕對不能解決問題. 因此考生應該養(yǎng)成良好的探索問題原因的習慣, 這個才是學習和測試的主要目的, 也是真正的應試方法.

Tuning to the BBC or CNN, one is besieged by (news about) formidable disasters, diseases, conflicts, and controversies. But none is more challenging than the shortage of fresh water, a source which has long been mistakenly assumed to be inexhaustible. Unfortunately, few people realize the impending (急迫的)potential catastrophe (災難)arising from the insufficient fresh water. Governments must be blamed if they have not informed people the importance of fresh water.

Fresh water has been closed associated with life, not only the life of human beings, but also the life of all kinds of plants and animals. Lacking fresh water, the earth will become ill. Nevertheless, human beings are confronted with the crisis of insufficient fresh water.

The shortage of fresh water can be attributed to the lower efficiency in water utilization. The irrigation in many countries wastes overwhelmingly. Some developing countries still use the primitive irrigation system, which is believed to waste at least 70% fresh water.

Life water utilization also shows strikingly lower efficiency. Many citizens have no concept of saving water. In most cities in China, fresh water is used to flush lavatories. Moreover, most citizens use wash-machine, which consumes a larger volume of fresh water.

Besides, fresh water has been polluted by agriculture and industry activities. Aquatic(水)ecosystem has largely been ruined by unrestricted drainage (排水)of sewages (污水). In metropolis (big cities大都市), the hospitals and laboratories are also the serious sources of water pollution.

Governments are expected to launch campaigns against water pollution. Individuals, households, and the states all should use their unique ways to save the limited resources.