雅思寫作范文：高水平運(yùn)動(dòng)員擁有高收入公平嗎

　　各位考鴨們，春天好啊，最近的兩會(huì)探討了不少收入差距大和社會(huì)資源再分配的問題。這也引起了大家對(duì)于高收入運(yùn)動(dòng)員們的熱烈討論。除了擁有強(qiáng)健的體魄和卓越的運(yùn)動(dòng)細(xì)胞，這些運(yùn)動(dòng)員們還有萬貫家財(cái)，大家是不是又羨慕又嫉妒呢?

　　successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justifies while others think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

　　這篇文章是劍橋雅思6中的考官例文。對(duì)于雙邊討論的題型，考官采取了引出話題-討論雙方論點(diǎn)-自己觀點(diǎn)的行文結(jié)構(gòu)：

　　第一段：回應(yīng)題目指出如今存在運(yùn)動(dòng)員們?nèi)缑餍前銚碛兄呤杖搿?/p>

　　第二段：指出那些認(rèn)為這類現(xiàn)象合理的觀點(diǎn)以及原因。

　　第三段：指出那些認(rèn)為該現(xiàn)象不合理的原因。

　　最后一段：回應(yīng)題目，引出自己的觀點(diǎn)以及總結(jié)全文。

　　在寫作中間段時(shí)大家一定要據(jù)理說明，可采取: topic sentence – idea – explain – example的寫法將內(nèi)容不斷擴(kuò)充。

　　As a result of(由于)constant media attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities, and those at the top are paid huge salaries. Just like movie stars, they live extravagant (奢侈的)lifestyles with huge houses and cars.

　　Many people find their rewards unfair, especially when comparing these super salaries with those of top surgeons (外科醫(yī)生)or research scientists, or even leading politicians who have the responsibility of governing the country. However, sports salaries are not determined (決定)by considering the contribution to society a person makes, or the level of responsibility he or she holds. Instead, they reflect the public popularity of sports in general and the level of public support that successful stars can generate. So the notion (概念) of ‘fairness’ is not the issue.

　　Those who feel that sports starts’ salaries are justified(合理的) might argue that the number of professionals with real talent are very few, and the money is a recognition of the skills and dedication (奉獻(xiàn))a person needs to be successful. Competition is constant and a player is tested every time they perform in their relatively short career. They pressure from the media is intense (強(qiáng)烈的) and there is little privacy out of the spotlight (聚光燈). So all of these factors may justify the huge earnings.

　　Personally, I think that the amount of (形容不可數(shù)的數(shù)量)money such sports stars make is more justified than the huge earnings of movie stars, but at the same time, it indicates that our society places more value on sport than on more essential (基本的)professions and achievements.

　　大家可以不斷借鑒，最終運(yùn)用到自己的作文中去～祝大家早日與雅思分手～