今天就教你,到底應(yīng)該正確的雅思寫作范文學(xué)習(xí)方法。
先找觀點,然后重構(gòu)
理解思維,需要重構(gòu)文章和段落。雅思作文字數(shù)不多,用議論文的方法將觀點將透徹是不現(xiàn)實的。
這就更需要我們在寫作時,觀點之間要邏輯通順,條理清晰。
我們該怎么做到呢?
從范文中找方法。一起看看simon大神的范文
題目:
More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
范文:
Cities are often seen as places of opportunity, but there are also some major drawbacks of living in a large metropolis. In my opinion, governments could do much more to improve city life for the average inhabitant.
The main problem for anyone who hopes to migrate to a large city is that the cost of living is likely to be much higher than it is in a small town or village. Inhabitants of cities have to pay higher prices for housing, transport, and even food. Another issue is that urban areas tend to suffer from social problems such as high crime and poverty rates in comparison with rural areas. Furthermore, the air quality in cities is often poor, due to pollution from traffic, and the streets and public transport systems are usually overcrowded. As a result, city life can be unhealthy and stressful.
However, there are various steps that governments could take to tackle these problems. Firstly, they could invest money in the building of affordable or social housing to reduce the cost of living. Secondly, politicians have the power to ban vehicles from city centres and promote the use of cleaner public transport, which would help to reduce both air pollution and traffic congestion. In London, for example, the introduction of a congestion charge for drivers has helped to curb the traffic problem. A third option would be to develop provincial towns and rural areas, by moving industry and jobs to those regions, in order to reduce the pressure on major cities.
In conclusion, governments could certainly implement a range of measures to enhance the quality of life for all city residents.
以第二段為例,我們一起把simon的觀點劃出來,方便后面的重構(gòu)。
畫出金字塔結(jié)構(gòu)
simon大神的第二段,用金字塔結(jié)構(gòu)重構(gòu),就是這樣了。紅色方框闡述了哪些問題,藍色方塊與紅色方塊則有邏輯關(guān)系了。
這兩層之間,縱向邏輯關(guān)系,只有三種關(guān)系存在(為什么,如何,你怎么知道)。
而simon用的就是how,比如大城市生活成本高于小城市,這是他提出的觀點,基于觀點他需要解釋在哪些方面生活成本更高。
畫圖,可以幫你理清思路,把一些不重要的信息過濾掉。